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The_Slyser
12-30-2007, 07:08 PM
Hi every one im photoshopin about 2 monthes and this is some of my designes i had more but i formtaed my cup so this is the onley ones i saved

pICTURE #1

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9583/drorart9.jpg


Picture #2

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/4485/drrrwl0.jpg

Picture #3

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/2541/shlomiqz6.jpg

well this is the onley ones i saved ill make more in time

please make ur apiniete on my designes

100%
12-30-2007, 07:40 PM
1. ok emotional?
2 ok but textcomposition fukd (pan right)., line thru head?
3. the slyser title reminds of cheese doodles

you asked

Ph4wX
12-30-2007, 08:45 PM
yup, borders are waay too fancy, its like black line, then white lines, then huuge shadow, wtf?? keep it simple, simple black 1px line often does it perfectly....

the text is tooo fancy.. like huuuge gloowing yellow orange text? wtf? usualy, if you see proffesional work, they try hiding it as much as they can, the point of a sig is not to show ur name.. but ur work

as 100% said, line thorough head?? also, get isnt blended in pic at all...

but yea, if you take those criticism well, you will get way better =]

gnometass
01-02-2008, 03:05 PM
i thotgh nr 2 was the nicest and u schould listen to Ph0x seems that he knows what he is talking about...

melatonin
01-02-2008, 03:09 PM
dude u need to practice some englishin too with your photoshopin ;)

dvd4alll
01-03-2008, 04:47 PM
The text needs 2 be fixed some way

grimms
01-06-2008, 05:20 AM
Some of the designs are nice but the text effects, shadowing, etc are alittle off. Good luck though photoshop is fun.