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JPaul
06-15-2005, 05:51 PM
How like a winter hath my absence been
From thee, the pleasure of the fleeting year!
What freezings have I felt, what dark days seen!
What old December's bareness every where!
And yet this time removed was summer's time,
The teeming autumn, big with rich increase,
Bearing the wanton burden of the prime,
Like widow'd wombs after their lords' decease:
Yet this abundant issue seem'd to me
But hope of orphans and unfather'd fruit;
For summer and his pleasures wait on thee,
And, thou away, the very birds are mute;
Or, if they sing, 'tis with so dull a cheer
That leaves look pale, dreading the winter's near.

manker
06-15-2005, 06:11 PM
Meh, it's a bit girlie. Chebus will like it.

http://img59.echo.cx/img59/586/chebus4xo.gif

Snee
06-15-2005, 06:14 PM
I prefer the metaphors :unsure:

JPaul
06-15-2005, 06:29 PM
Metaphors are like a poor man's simile

manker
06-15-2005, 06:35 PM
Metaphors are like a poor man's simileYou need ice in your veins to use them with aplomb.

JPaul
06-15-2005, 06:38 PM
Aplomb is as aplomb does.

Snee
06-15-2005, 06:38 PM
I don't know, they seem more common to me, like

manker
06-15-2005, 06:41 PM
Like totally, SnnY.

Snee
06-15-2005, 06:42 PM
Which is more common, though?

manker
06-15-2005, 06:48 PM
If you, like totally, include that and similar figures of speech - I'd say similies are definitely more common.

Otherwise I'd say similies are probably more common :unsure:

Snee
06-15-2005, 06:58 PM
I meant between . and



(before your edit :dry: )