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EXT. BATTLEFIELD – DAY
Cuillaume just stands there and watches, he is strong mighty warrior, a lot of white hair on his arms, but he’s not eager to fight the beast, instead he finds King Estmund, storms to him when seeing him laying on the ground. He’s dead.
MAC CUILLAUME (TALL)
In the ball up of the battle, man running here and there, the fight stops at an instant at Cuillaume’s cry. Everything is still; Cuillaume grabs a war-axe and makes a whirlwind under it when he throws the weapon at the frog. It cuts as a wedge in to one of its small underdeveloped wings. An ear-locking roar, he pulls it out with his teeth, tosses it. He is angry but tired; the battle abates for the day.