umm, ok thanks for the compliment, you just told me ive achieved what i told you before i set out to do.
your a complete retard, serious
umm, ok thanks for the compliment, you just told me ive achieved what i told you before i set out to do.
your a complete retard, serious
Well done on achieving what you set out to do. You're obviously the kind of girl who likes to aim low so as to avoid disappointment.
I mean, it would be probably be too much to ask that you set out to write something that was weird, different and half-decent to read.MaybeObviously, writing isn't your thing.
Don't give up the day-job (if you have one), I don't think you'll be making poet laureate just yet.
^no, your still a retard
I believe it's someone pretending to be JPaul. I don't even know where to begin, as far as critiquing of the story is concerned.
Cheese's summary was dead on. It's pointless drivel and I would rather read and discuss someones genuine attempt at art - pretentious or not. It's obvious that the writer thinks he's being clever, by feigning a weak writers posture.
I believe that in reality you have nothing compelling to offer, at all (at all).
If it was a genuine attempt...I'm sorry. (empathy) Have you thought about starting a blog?
-bd
^ haha, what a fucking retard! look at him shit his words out. what a fucktard
-ifackyourmomeveryday
lynx if I complain about thisMr.Mystery chaptard will you ban him please?
Now go away.
i havent broke any rules yet, spanner
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