What Is Wrong With This Paragraph?

[MicroScreen2]

theres nothing wrong is there

[pusher]

Originally posted by Keikan@7 July 2004 - 00:57

I am not a model but I am to my daddy.

What is wrong with this paragraph?

There's something morally wrong with this statement.

[MicroScreen2]

Originally posted by pusher+7 July 2004 - 12:16--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pusher @ 7 July 2004 - 12:16)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Keikan@7 July 2004 - 00:57

I am not a model but I am to my daddy.

What is wrong with this paragraph?

There&#39;s something morally wrong with this statement. [/b][/quote]
meh&#33; that doesn&#39;t mean her dads a peadophile, just that she&#39;s his little angel. you know, she&#39;s a spoilt brat

[MagicNakor]

A better question would be to ask what is right with that wordbrick.

[pusher]

Originally posted by MicroScreen2@7 July 2004 - 02:19
meh&#33; that doesn&#39;t mean her dads a peadophile, just that she&#39;s his little angel. you know, she&#39;s a spoilt brat

Well, you say potato.

[MicroScreen2]

Originally posted by pusher+7 July 2004 - 12:22--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pusher @ 7 July 2004 - 12:22)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MicroScreen2@7 July 2004 - 02:19
meh&#33; that doesn&#39;t mean her dads a peadophile, just that she&#39;s his little angel. you know, she&#39;s a spoilt brat

Well, you say potato. [/b][/quote]
i say &#39;tater

[pusher]

Originally posted by MicroScreen2@7 July 2004 - 02:25
i say &#39;tater

Hmm... now I want some french fries.

[MicroScreen2]

Originally posted by pusher+7 July 2004 - 12:26--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pusher @ 7 July 2004 - 12:26)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MicroScreen2@7 July 2004 - 02:25
i say &#39;tater

Hmm... now I want some french fries. [/b][/quote]
you can have half a chip butty if you want. only 50p

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[hobbes]

Originally posted by MagicNakor@7 July 2004 - 10:20
A better question would be to ask what is right with that wordbrick.

"Wordbrick" is a copyrighted neologism belonging to me.

My attorney&#39;s are considering legal action and they will definitely your ass.


BTW Keikan, it is "grammar".

[Biggles]

Originally posted by MicroScreen2@7 July 2004 - 11:02

HI my name is Sara. I have one little brother named Joey, he is really annoying&#33; <s>and</s> I am not a model but I am to my daddy. I am not asian, I am fully canadian and I have blackish brown hair. I have brown eyes. My msn is not working right now so please don&#39;t ask for it yet, I will tell you when its up.

i know i&#39;ve missed something

The final sentence - it should say "when it&#39;s up".

The grammar and punctuation are awful - so nothing unusual there.

Is it the assertion that one cannot be Asian and fully Canadian?