[Venting] It's all so sh*t!!111

[MCHeshPants420]

Chebus, did you critique my poetism re manker in a jar. I'd love to know your opinion on it.

I must have missed that...

[JPaul]

https://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/showt...3&page=2&pp=10

I went for a simple abcb, nothing too advanced.

I think it works rather well.

[manker]

https://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/showt...3&page=2&pp=10

I went for a simple abcb, nothing too advanced.

I think it works rather well.

I thought it read rather like a verse one might compose on Feb 14th. If Sam^4 could have made a snazzy flash envelope with an appropriate acronym, like POLO or HOLLAND, written upon it then it would have rounded the effort off quite nicely.

[MCHeshPants420]

https://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/showt...3&page=2&pp=10

I went for a simple abcb, nothing too advanced.

I think it works rather well.

I like it. A nice mix of beer, football and manc mocking.

[sArA]

I see no-one thought my poetic contribution in the same thread worth a comment?

Bah...philistines, no discussion with regard to my cunning use of colloquial naming to contemporise the reference base?


Or did no one actually get it?

[JPaul]

Sara,

I for one was impressed by the colonic shaming to compromise the referees bees

[bigboab]

Dickory Dickory Dock
The mouse ran up the clock
The clock struck one
The mouse got crushed in the machinery.

Is that prose or poetry?

[JPaul]

Dickory Dickory Dock
The mouse ran up the clock
The clock struck one
The mouse got crushed in the machinery.

Is that prose or poetry?

Yes

[bigboab]

Yes

Thanks for clearing that up.

[JPaul]

Thanks for clearing that up.

NP bawbag.