A Purposeful Poem

[J'Pol]

Originally posted by j2k4@23 October 2003 - 07:10


First, I'd whip a little spellcheck on it; but that's just me, I'm picky about spelling, downright finicky, in fact.

Is spellcheck a word ?

Given the context, is it a verb ? Though you seem to have applied an adjective to it, which would tend to suggest a noun.

Have you been afflicted with the comma fascination again ?

Are you in fact a .... oh never mind.

[thewizeard]

I think it's meant to be read backwards... Still don't give up forbiddenDNA.

[Yogi]

I'll try working it up:

me world is pointless..
me is confused,...distracted..
me world is pointless..
Oooo, desparation in me thirst,
me world is pointless..
me is thee creator

me has thought..
Possessing love fulfill me satisfacted...
Me thought..
Possess the satisfaction..would fulfill prosperity
Me thought..
Me yerrrr creator

Cos"
Me Greediness an' me violence are present..
Cos'
Jealousness and ******** are present..
Cos
Me is perfection

Now...
Me provide Perfection ..
Now
Me CREATIVE.....

Now can anybody put this to rap???

Yogi

[j2k4]

Originally posted by JPaul+23 October 2003 - 17:59--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (JPaul &#064; 23 October 2003 - 17:59)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-j2k4@23 October 2003 - 07:10


First, I&#39;d whip a little spellcheck on it; but that&#39;s just me, I&#39;m picky about spelling, downright finicky, in fact.

Is spellcheck a word ?

Given the context, is it a verb ? Though you seem to have applied an adjective to it, which would tend to suggest a noun.

Have you been afflicted with the comma fascination again ?

Are you in fact a .... oh never mind.[/b][/quote]
Actually, I must confess little familiarity with......uh, it, JPaul-I have never used it.

My over-use of punctuation is a remnant of an old tendency to write in run-on sentences, which, I&#39;m sure you will agree, I have overcome.

Iam fascinated with commas, as you say-I like their shape.

, , , , , , , , ,

Yes&#33;&#33;&#33;

[j2k4]

Originally posted by SensualGardening@23 October 2003 - 18:12
I&#39;ll try working it up:

me world is pointless..
me is confused,...distracted..
me world is pointless..
Oooo, desparation in me thirst,
me world is pointless..
me is thee creator

me has thought..
Possessing love fulfill me satisfacted...
Me thought..
Possess the satisfaction..would fulfill prosperity
Me thought..
Me yerrrr creator

Cos"
Me Greediness an&#39; me&nbsp; violence are present..
Cos&#39;
Jealousness and ******** are present..
Cos
Me is perfection

Now...
Me provide Perfection ..
Now
Me CREATIVE.....

Now can anybody put this to rap???

Yogi

I must say, I do like that.

[TheFilePirater]

i think it should have a lil bout porn, and pirating, and pussy <---best things in life

[ForbiddenDNA]

Poetry does not always have to rhyme.
There are many kinds of poetry.
Poetry does not have to be in correct grammar, just creative..
I took creative writing, i know..

I admit i still need to work on alittle error.

[sparsely]

okay.
at least there&#39;s some honest critics here.
Here&#39;s a sample of my..
whatever.
:

@Chevron.com

Fortune 500 particle board
the Quakers rose the shop

and off went Friar Tuck&#39;s poor head
the Battle Hymn hath stopped.

Time he met
what time will tell
dead priests will never ring
the telephone for patrons
at the Chevron in the spring.

*|#& () in thee (should be read "star, stop, pound sign, ampers and partentheis...")
cufflinks stuck with magnets
rabbits whistling Dixie.

So round, and round, and round again
the booze will always flow
on all the brilliant, calloused hands
and tanned atheletic toes.

Corruption in the Omnibus
though words can never fail
The heart is built like Romulus
The teeth are shaped like nails.

Five and one and Avon Calling
whispered in his ear
the second southboud falling down the
creaky basement stairs.

Time he bet
the time not his
dreambags all held with string
of spirits warped construction
of the Chevron in the spring

[Billy_Dean]

Originally posted by j2k4@23 October 2003 - 15:10
Hmmmm......

First, I&#39;d whip a little spellcheck on it; but that&#39;s just me, I&#39;m picky about spelling, downright finicky, in fact.

I&#39;m not speaking for j2k4 here. But ...

[Yogi]

Originally posted by j2k4+24 October 2003 - 05:13--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (j2k4 @ 24 October 2003 - 05:13)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SensualGardening@23 October 2003 - 18:12
I&#39;ll try working it up:

me world is pointless..
me is confused,...distracted..
me world is pointless..
Oooo, desparation in me thirst,
me world is pointless..
me is thee creator

me has thought..
Possessing love fulfill me satisfacted...
Me thought..
Possess the satisfaction..would fulfill prosperity
Me thought..
Me yerrrr creator

Cos"
Me Greediness an&#39; me violence are present..
Cos&#39;
Jealousness and ******** are present..
Cos
Me is perfection

Now...
Me provide Perfection ..
Now
Me CREATIVE.....

Now can anybody put this to rap???

Yogi

I must say, I do like that. [/b][/quote]
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