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[MCHeshPants420]

Love Letter

A letter, my love, of our passion’s end
ever outpacing our critics’ reviews.
Arrows they have pessimistically penned
pierce imprints left by our fast running shoes.

Their thoughts in confounded pretzels ensnare
for they do not draw each breath from your sighs.
They have never lost themselves in your hair,
nor danced to the melody of your eyes.


Look at me! I’m rhyming! I’m rhyming!
Writing beautiful nonsense for you,
my dismembered thoughts in strict timing,
you always serve as my blushing muse.

‘melody of your eyes’ – what rotten cheese!
‘lost in your hair’ – what clichéd muck!
But I’ll form these coprolites when you please
For as long as they get me fucked.

[ruthie]

How about a love letter, truly expressing your heart.

[peat moss]

You leaned over and you kissed me
I felt my knees go weak
You leaned over and you kissed me
I couldn't even speak.................. You finish it .

[99%]

Dear Suzy
I have fifty thousand dollars
lets go on vacation
luf neo

(texts with money in it always rhyme)

[JPaul]

Make up your mind
Him or me
I need to know
Let it be me.

See how I clevrely used the abcb methid and then went on to rime me with me.

Its a winnir mait.

[GepperRankins]

just a warning.


dave's eyes are stinging
he only had 4 hours sleep
dave's stomach aches
there's nothing for him to eat
dave has bad skin
he also has wonky teeth
if god does that to wankers
what will he do to cheats?

[Mr. Mulder]

[{I}{K}{E}]

Why do you also need to give her a poem?

Just tell her how much you love her.

[Skiz]

I seem to a way with the ladies lately. Maybe I should speak to her.

*rehearses whispering sweet nothings*

[manker]

just a warning.


dave's eyes are stinging
he only had 4 hours sleep
dave's stomach aches
there's nothing for him to eat
dave has bad skin
he also has wonky teeth
if god does that to wankers
what will he do to cheats?

You wrote that to missus neo

Critique:

No capital letters but it's better than my arse poem.