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Yogi
10-28-2003, 02:14 PM
In this one you can say as you please,
Just had a sandwich with cheese,

Wanna talk babe,
she'd better be in shape,

Doesn't matter what you write,
It may be fun, it may be shite,

THIS IS POETIC CHALLENGE LITE!!!!!(++)

Evil Gemini
10-28-2003, 02:37 PM
This klite forum is cool
Except for scotchguy hes a fool

I have nothing else to say

Oh wait ill show you my other poem OK ?

Im reloading my gun
To start shooting agian
Im going to have some fun
Because im going to shoot my freind

He will begg me to stop
Or he will call a cop

I will just laugh at his face
Because im a mental case

He really pissed me off

My dear old freind

He will now get shot

BANG

THE END!

It might be a little crazy
but its better than writing about a daisy

you guys can flame me all you want
You can even call me a cont ( sorry :blink: )

Yogi
10-28-2003, 02:44 PM
It might be a little crazy
but its better than writing about a daisy

you guys can flame me all you want
You can even call me a cont ( sorry )


Okay, so from now on you're called cont,
i'll just say this real upfront,

This thread is really not to flame,
But i won't dare and blame,

Cos Sc**** said some really nasty shit,
But next time do it with some whit.....

Riddler
10-28-2003, 02:50 PM
Sensual gardening I have not done
Don't want no onion up my bum !

Give me credit or a wad of cash
And I'll visit the grocer for my stash....

Of veggies that is, clean up your mind !
How do you like my silly rhyme ?

:P

UKMan
10-28-2003, 02:54 PM
could not resist to post in here,
and give a toast - a mighty cheer,
the ideas come and never cease,
the lounge is where you find your peace,
whilst sitting on your rear.

so drink my friends and sit thee down,
though thoughts may differ i will not frown,
my friend you are and allways be,
and in the end we all will see,
that all may wear the crown.

a final note to finish off,
and so i say - excuse the cough,
be glad you found a resting place,
somewhere out there in cyberspace,
no more - yepp - thats enough.

k-lite serenade.

Peace
UKMan

Yogi
10-28-2003, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by Riddler@28 October 2003 - 15:50
Sensual gardening I have not done
Don't want no onion up my bum !

Give me credit or a wad of cash
And I'll visit the grocer for my stash....

Of veggies that is, clean up your mind !
How do you like my silly rhyme ?

:P
Oh, Riddler, Riddler, my good friend,
Your poetry is heaven sent.....

And though i sense you're female side,
keep on rhyming, it's your right!!!


:P Yogi

Yogi
10-28-2003, 03:10 PM
Originally posted by UKMan@28 October 2003 - 15:54
could not resist to post in here,
and give a toast - a mighty cheer,
the ideas come and never cease,
the lounge is where you find your peace,
whilst sitting on your rear.

so drink my friends and sit thee down,
though thoughts may differ i will not frown,
my friend you are and allways be,
and in the end we all will see,
that all may wear the crown.

a final note to finish off,
and so i say - excuse the cough,
be glad you found a resting place,
somewhere out there in cyberspace,
no more - yepp - thats enough.

k-lite serenade.

Peace
UKMan
If that isn't UKman,
showing what he really can

do with words that really rhyme
I like my wodka with some Lime!!!

http://www.katlurkin.com/smiley/animated/smiley3/witch.gif

Yogi :rolleyes:

Evil Gemini
10-28-2003, 03:14 PM
ukman that was really good
Please make some more I think you should
I cant make good rhymes because i suck
the only words i can think of now are fuck and duck

I wish i could rhyme just like you
its getting late i can just write a few

I think its fun to talk like this
Oh shit ill be back i need to do a piss

Yogi
10-28-2003, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by neattairoski@28 October 2003 - 16:14
ukman that was really good
Please make some more I think you should
I cant make good rhymes because i suck
the only words i can think of now are fuck and duck

I wish i could rhyme just like you
its getting late i can just write a few

I think its fun to talk like this
Oh shit ill be back i need to do a piss
Hey, what are you ranting you can't rhyme!
you really show it's not a crime,

So when you return from losing piss,
Write another, i won't miss.......

B) Yogi

UKMan
10-28-2003, 03:27 PM
Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 16:10
If that isn't UKman,
showing what he really can

do with words that really rhyme
I like my wodka with some Lime!!!

http://www.katlurkin.com/smiley/animated/smiley3/witch.gif

Yogi :rolleyes:
Oh SensualGardening i must praise,
you've lightened up these autumn days,
your witt is sharp the idea great,
you truly are a cybermate,
i hope its not a phase.

neattairoski dont dispair,
you really tried that shows you care,
it dosnt matter - words no amount,
or ryme itself just does not count,
participate with flare.

Peace
UKMan

Yogi
10-28-2003, 03:35 PM
Ohhh, UKman, Ohhh, UKman, you make me shy,
too much compliments will make me cry,

And sure, my friend, this is a phase*,
But it'll be a loooong one

Cos i like it when you praise........

http://www.katlurkin.com/smiley/animated/smiley6/grin.gif

Yogi


*My last phase took a year or five,
But in the lounge i feel alive!!!

Evil Gemini
10-28-2003, 03:58 PM
Good night people
Im of to bed

im getting tired
feels like im gonna drop dead

When the sun rises
I will be back

goodnight again
Im gonna hit the sack

Thanks for being nice
and not being meen

im really of to bed
to dream about models in cream

UKMan
10-28-2003, 04:02 PM
i hope that others join us soon,
in this poetic k-lite room,
my head is spinning round and round,
trying hard to find a sound,
that rymes with room and soon.

but after all is said and done,
this really is most joyfull fun,
so join in folks and donate all,
and show your brains are on the ball,
accept the challenge and come.

Peace
UKMan

mrcall1969
10-28-2003, 04:31 PM
The UKMan he lives in Sweden
With all those blondes it must be Eden
It surely must be a case for Holmes
How UKMan can write these poems
He likes his music, he likes to DJ
If we don't like it we'll give him leeway

I hope there's someone else out there
Who can write some verse so we can stare
The time for Witching is nearly upon us
So a spooky tale will do the honours
So come on folks and lend a hand
Make a rhyme cause this is bland

Lilmiss
10-28-2003, 06:27 PM
hello everyone. :D
hows your day?
ive just popped in,
to have a play.

congratulations on
such a unique thread.
but trying to form a sentance,
is damaging my head.

should i lie down,
or think i while.
for an witty poem,
i'd end up with piles. :blink:

maybe i should just,
leave it to the experts.
all this rhyming,
makes my brain cells hurt. :huh:

Yogi
10-28-2003, 07:02 PM
hello everyone. 
hows your day?
ive just popped in,
to have a play.

congratulations on
such a unique thread.
but trying to form a sentance,
is damaging my head.

should i lie down,
or think i while.
for an witty poem,
i'd end up with piles. 

maybe i should just,
leave it to the experts.
all this rhyming,
makes my brain cells hurt. 



Everyone 's a poet, baby, that's no lie,
her sig shows lillmiss just the way,
don't ask me why....... :P

Everone 's a poet, baby, you just try,
Lillmiss' brain will really fry,
and make my day,

And Now EveryOne!!!!

Everyone 's a poet, baby, that's no lie,
When even Lilmiss makes us cry,
Oh, me, oh, my,
Oh, my, oh, me,

This thread will set you really free!!!!

:P Yogi

Lilmiss
10-28-2003, 07:36 PM
aww...now how sweet. :)
thats really made me blush.
dunno how to thank you,
except write some mush.

or we could roll a fattie,
and set her own fire.
i'll use my own stuff,
and we can get higher. :blink:

tanks again yogi.
you've made an ole girl smile.
think i'll be in a good mood,
for quite a while. :D

Yogi
10-28-2003, 08:08 PM
aww...now how sweet. :)
thats really made me blush.
dunno how to thank you,
except write some mush.

or we could roll a fattie,
and set her on fire.
i'll use my own stuff,
and we can get higher. :blink:

thanks again yogi.
you've made an ole girl smile.
think i'll be in a good mood,
for quite a while. :D


Lilmiss, you are welcome
Allways felt a bond for some
Mysterious reason
And then some.....

Me fattie is on fire now
Me feelin Woopsy-Wow
you know how....
http://www.pot-tv.net/


Yogi :P
http://www.pot-tv.net/images/pot-tv_blackicon57.gif

UKMan
10-28-2003, 08:22 PM
wow - mrcall1969,
just sat right down and wrote some lines,
i thank him dearly but thought it through,
these fair haired swedes aint gotta clue.

blonde on top but dark inside,
all these years i sure have tried,
they catch you with their georgous bods,
then strangle you those sexy sods.

sherlock holmes you mentioned here,
he didnt help - hes such a dear,
go right ahead was all he said,
i have to solve a case instead.

Peace
UKMan

UKMan
10-28-2003, 08:32 PM
i have to say im quite impressed,
with lilmiss she must be blessed,
but hang on folks do i detect,
a love match here must be correct.

SensualGardening and lilmiss,
have made a hit now wheres that kiss,
or are they stoned and lying down,
each others arms they may be found.

this truly is a marvelous place,
two people found in cyberspace,
what words and words alone can do,
that peace exists - believe me - its true.

Peace
UKMan

Yogi
10-28-2003, 08:46 PM
Wow, Lilmiss, is this true
Feel those vibes come throug??

I'm not sure and somewhat shy
UKman is really such a guy

But there's really thingz to tell
Me allready relationwise quite well

Though our connection may be clear http://cannabisculture.com/uploads/703571-lsxbr4.jpgAnd we think eachother dear

It'll just be here,
the lounge, our cyberflow
Our virtua-kisses will forever glow....................

bigboab
10-28-2003, 09:08 PM
This was written with someones heartbreak in mind :lol:


Down through the years, love's brought us tears
Through death and tragedy
With that in mind, I'll try and find
A word of sympathy.

Adam and Eve, the first to mind
The leaders of them all
Till an apple tempted them
It led to their downfall,


Then Hero and Leander
Their love was sealed by Fates
When the water swallowed him
In the Dardanellae straits.

There was Philemon and Baucis
They could not be separated
So they ended up as a pair of trees
As Zeus and Hermes stated.

Pyrams and Thisbe had to flee
Their love was not consented
Pyramus died by his own sword
Thisbe died demented.

Samson loved Delilah true
He was at her beck and call
She cut his hair till he was bare
It nearly was his downfall

Antony had his Cleo true
But off to war he went
Cleo's heart was broke in two
So an asp was heaven sent.

Romeo love Juliet
Their families were not so keen though
So they made a pact to end it all
It was so sad to see them go.

Robin had his merry men
He also had Maid Marian
The Sheriff tried to thwart it all
Because he was loves rapscallion.

Victoria had her Albert true
He died when they were younger
It so broke her heart to be apart
That she dressed in black forever.

More up to date Titanic came
The ending was a shocker
But the worst of all, along came Paul
To banish the love of Clocker

BBKL2003







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Yogi
10-28-2003, 09:17 PM
Oh, me, oh, my,

This is soooo sad

And though the rhyme is not half bad

I wish thee follow up with cheer

Cos us poets like it joyous here......


MOOOHOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

UKMan
10-28-2003, 09:30 PM
yeegads bigboab may i say,
your pen is quick this very day,
those tales thee tell of olden passion,
may never ever go out of fashion.

allthough so sad of love thee tell,
its true love is a living hell,
salute thee i do willingly,
but love is all that makes us free.

Peace
UKMan

bigboab
10-28-2003, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by UKMan@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But Clocker's young
You better duck below the dung

Yogi
10-28-2003, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by bigboab+28 October 2003 - 22:43--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bigboab @ 28 October 2003 - 22:43)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-UKMan@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But has Clocker seen this line of yours? :lol: [/b][/quote]
RHYME-ALERT: to BigBoab we should say
Make it rhyme or spoil our day
But we know thee edit soon
Or you are a big buffoon.............

bigboab
10-28-2003, 10:09 PM
Although I try to make it rhyme
I cannot do it all the time
If you try to make me change my verse
I will come right in and kick your erse* ( *Scottish for arse)

UKMan
10-28-2003, 10:18 PM
Originally posted by SensualGardening+28 October 2003 - 23:02--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SensualGardening @ 28 October 2003 - 23:02)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by bigboab@28 October 2003 - 22:43
<!--QuoteBegin-UKMan@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But has Clocker seen this line of yours? :lol:
RHYME-ALERT: to BigBoab we should say
Make it rhyme or spoil our day
But we know thee edit soon
Or you are a big buffoon............. [/b][/quote]
the rules of poetry engaged,
have made SensualGardening somewhat enraged,
bigboab returned to make his plea,
and made a pitch which all agree,
t&#39;was swift and blunt if truth was said,
but now farewell - tis time for bed.

Peace
UKMan

bigboab
10-28-2003, 10:21 PM
Originally posted by UKMan+28 October 2003 - 22:18--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (UKMan @ 28 October 2003 - 22:18)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 23:02

Originally posted by bigboab@28 October 2003 - 22:43
<!--QuoteBegin-UKMan@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But has Clocker seen this line of yours? :lol:
RHYME-ALERT: to BigBoab we should say
Make it rhyme or spoil our day
But we know thee edit soon
Or you are a big buffoon.............
the rules of poetry engaged,
have made SensualGardening somewhat enraged,
bigboab returned to make his plea,
and made a pitch which all agree,
t&#39;was swift and blunt if truth was said,
but now farewell - tis time for bed.

Peace
UKMan [/b][/quote]
Ukman fights for what is right.
Let us all just say good night

Yogi
10-28-2003, 10:23 PM
Originally posted by bigboab@28 October 2003 - 23:09
Although I try to make it rhyme
I cannot do it all the time
If you try to make me change my verse
I will come right in and kick your erse* ( *Scottish for arse)
Oh, you mighty boab, what a verse,
Would you really, really like to kick my erse,

That might really come in handy
Cos my hammeroids feel quite dandy.........

;) Yogi

mrcall1969
10-28-2003, 10:25 PM
Oh dear , have I a stumbled
On a lovenest that has been rumbled
Lilmiss and SensualGardening are a flirting
Me and UKMan will look at the skirting
If you two need some space
We&#39;ll go and find another place
And let you rhyme to one another
We prefer to drink so it&#39;s no bother

bigboab
10-28-2003, 10:31 PM
Originally posted by SensualGardening+28 October 2003 - 22:23--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SensualGardening @ 28 October 2003 - 22:23)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bigboab@28 October 2003 - 23:09
Although I try to make it rhyme
I cannot do it all the time
If you try to make me change my verse
I will come right in and kick your erse* ( *Scottish for arse)
Oh, you mighty boab, what a verse,
Would you really, really like to kick my erse,

That might really come in handy
Cos my hammeroids feel quite dandy.........

;) Yogi [/b][/quote]
If your erse I kick when we are parting
It will push them up and stop you farting

Evil Gemini
10-29-2003, 12:17 AM
I just woke up and turned on my pc
Logged on to the forum and what did i see ?

SensualGardening got lilmiss blushing
and also their was something about farting

Ill be back about an hour
I stink really bad i need a shower

Yogi
10-29-2003, 12:22 AM
Originally posted by bigboab+28 October 2003 - 23:31--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bigboab @ 28 October 2003 - 23:31)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 22:23
<!--QuoteBegin-bigboab@28 October 2003 - 23:09
Although I try to make it rhyme
I cannot do it all the time
If you try to make me change my verse
I will come right in and kick your erse* ( *Scottish for arse)
Oh, you mighty boab, what a verse,
Would you really, really like to kick my erse,

That might really come in handy
Cos my hammeroids feel quite dandy.........

;) Yogi
If your erse I kick when we are parting
It will push them up and stop you farting [/b][/quote]
And that would really break my heart

Cos i most definitly like to fart

I like to fart when i&#39;m depressed

i like to fart when i&#39;m obsessed

O, Yeah, with farting i am blessed

Lala LalaLala LalaLala

O, Yeah, my farts i are deeeply blessed

LoloLo LoloLo Lolo LoDiDa&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Me new crop is just tha best.....

Lolo LoDiDa&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; Lala LalaLala &#33;&#33;&#33;




[off to sleep] :) Yogi

bigboab
10-29-2003, 12:28 AM
Originally posted by neattairoski@29 October 2003 - 00:17
I just woke up and turned on my pc
Logged on to the forum and what did i see ?

SensualGardening got lilmiss blushing
and also their was something about farting

Ill be back about an hour
I stink really bad i need a shower
When you are clean
And re-read what you have seen
It will become quite clear
That we are proper in here
What you refer to as farting
Was just a car starting
As for lilmiss blushing
It was blood to her face rushing
If you think you can do better
Post us a letter
But it must be poetic
Or you will be considered pathetic.

mrcall1969
10-29-2003, 12:31 AM
Oh dear with all this talk of farting
My lips I fear are scared of parting
I for one do not want to smell it
And I&#39;d rather my candle stays lit

So please take the verse onto a lighter feel
Or I for one will surely squeal
And please someone add some more
to save me from becomming a bore

bigboab
10-29-2003, 12:38 AM
You&#39;re not boring me 69
Your poems are doing just fine
I would put out the candle
For gas it can&#39;t handle
It will cause a big bang
And I&#39;ve written this wrang
I think I&#39;ll call it a day
So what now do you say?

Evil Gemini
10-29-2003, 12:40 AM
My intension was not to flame
I didnt meen anything by it,
Im just playing the game

I like the things being said,
gave me a smile
I havent gotten one in a while

So next time i reply to this thread
I would re think it in my head

So it doesnt sound like a flame
Because i dont want to look sad and lame

mrcall1969
10-29-2003, 12:45 AM
OK, now i need another wine
This poetry is going fine
My favourite girl is out getting pissed
From this board she will be missed
So come on Bigboab and give a hook
A rhyme upon which I can sook

bigboab
10-29-2003, 12:49 AM
We are letting you off
Because you behave like a toff
As long as you reply
You can give a big sigh
But if you don’t make it rhyme
We will get you some other time.
You write something instead
Because I&#39;m going to bed

Yogi
10-29-2003, 12:53 AM
[awake again, hihi]

Oh dear with all this talk of farting
My lips I fear are scared of parting
I for one do not want to smell it
And I&#39;d rather my candle stays lit

So please take the verse onto a lighter feel
Or I for one will surely squeal
And please someone add some more
to save me from becomming a bore
and since i am the poet-hoe

I make yer need for lighter feel now real

Lala LalaLala LalaLala
LoloLo LoloLo Lolo LoDiDa&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

And now for the last time from the heart

Let&#39;s all celebrate the fart..................

PfghfssssPOEF&#33;&#33;&#33;





:sorcerer: :w00t: :sorcerer:

mrcall1969
10-29-2003, 12:55 AM
You think that I behave like a toff
Well then you can truelly koff
I&#39;m as rough as they may come
So stick that up your sagging bum

I bid you good night dear poet
And hope t&#39;row your words will sow it
The seeds of thought is what I mean
So go and dream your happy dream

bigboab
10-29-2003, 01:12 AM
How do you know that it is sagging
I have propped it up with some lagging
But the rest is all dropping
Now I am definitely stopping
Cause I think there is somebody gagging.

mrcall1969
10-29-2003, 01:21 AM
Aha I hear you talk of gagging
Must be your good lady that needs a shagging
I will not keep you from your duties
So give her one from all us beauties
And if you fail to make her happy
Then I recommend you buy a strappy

bigboab
10-29-2003, 01:29 AM
Though she lies by my side
Alas I take bromide
She&#39;ll have to read quit a selection
Till next years erection
In order shag her(your words)
I will need Viagra
So if you know where to get it
I will not regret it.

mrcall1969
10-29-2003, 01:37 AM
A-ha you may need viagra
My hotmail box is full offers
To make me big they do a promise
But theres only one that I would trust

Alas tonight she is causing mayhem
So with that Im afraid I am but lonesome
But do not fear, or worry or ponder
tomorrow night she will cast her wonder

Lilmiss
10-29-2003, 01:57 AM
Originally posted by UKMan@28 October 2003 - 20:32
SensualGardening and lilmiss,
have made a hit now wheres that kiss,
or are they stoned and lying down,
each others arms they may be found.


oh no dear sir,
you mis-understand.
for my love lies,
in another land.

although i must add,
s.g is a sweet guy.
with his lush poetry,
and sensual high. ;)

i love you all,
in different ways.
and wish you all,
special happy days. :) .

UKMan
10-29-2003, 02:51 AM
Originally posted by lilmiss@29 October 2003 - 02:57
oh no dear sir,
you mis-understand.
for my love lies,
in another land.

although i must add,
s.g is a sweet guy.
with his lush poetry,
and sensual high. ;)

i love you all,
in different ways.
and wish you all,
special happy days. :) .
these cyber rooms are so deceptive,
casting love to girls selective,
allas dear SG though not returned,
&#39;miss felt your presence and yet thee spurned.

this tale of old of love rejected,
seizes body as though infected,
what man can stand against such powers,
thoughts ablaze into dark hours.

so daylight comes to those who wait,
and we can but refresh our bait,
we hope to win the lady fair,
who dares to tread inside our lair.

Peace
UKMan

sparsely
10-29-2003, 03:16 AM
Matilda mother got
in her heavy house coat.

all shambling and with mud in her hair
the fire burned down in the village

overturned cars brodcasting static

blood smeared on the doors of the houses.

The ruins stuck out
around her worn-down slippers

and the sun went down for good.


All the trees are hollow now
the wind&#39;s become a moan.

Paid in full
you got what you bought
and God, I hope it&#39;s cold.

http://pleasurecraft.va.com.au/safechamber/ycnsa.jpg

mrcall1969
10-29-2003, 03:26 AM
Originally posted by Sparsely@29 October 2003 - 04:16
Matilda mother got
in her heavy house coat.

all shambling and with mud in her hair
the fire burned down in the village

overturned cars brodcasting static

blood smeared on the doors of the houses.

The ruins stuck out
around her worn-down slippers

and the sun went down for good.


All the trees are hollow now
the wind&#39;s become a moan.

Paid in full
you got what you bought
and God, I hope it&#39;s cold.

http://pleasurecraft.va.com.au/safechamber/ycnsa.jpg
I love it..I Love..I really do....you got music for that?

sparsely
10-29-2003, 03:28 AM
thanks for saying so...
wish I had music for it, but I&#39;m not really inclined that way I guess. Though I do hear music as I&#39;m drifting off to sleep, and it&#39;s
not any I&#39;ve heard anywhere else.
I just don&#39;t have the talent to convert it. <_<

silent VI
10-29-2003, 04:27 AM
feel in love wit ya
The minute I met ya
Your eyes shone like jewels,how could i forget ya.
You the queen me the jester,did my part 2 impress,
though i was never second best still put to your test.
And nothing felt better than your breath on my chest,my true real inspiration to get me otta this mess.
Thank god im blessed,let me guard her even after my death,fot true love manifests beyond the measures of depth.
Yes my elegant lady love gift from above,perfect posture and stance,like you was created to dance,lost in your trance addicted to your wild romance shoered wit affection girl give me a chance just to explain how you kept my soul tame my life in perspective on the track and right lane ,somehow kept me sane when this worlds gone mad so im happy to let u know why i feel so glad
your that one sweet missus that i had 2 have got me walking wit my head up feeling big n bad ;so from my heart 2 my unborn i swear love etrnal and to u my wild romance.

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Yogi
10-29-2003, 09:20 AM
Ah, Well, goodmorning to you all&#33;&#33;
Let&#39;s have some more poetic ball

Thank you lilmiss for explaining why
our "love" in cyberspace &#39;s no lie

But not just for eachother
Alas all poets are our brother(&#33;?)

We are not selfish by all means
So we share our lovin&#39; screens

Mwah, this rhyme is really sucking
so before you all start ducking


I ask again you all

Keep this poetry glowing

Let the sun shine, be it fall

And though the winter will be showing


Be a real poetic troll&#33;&#33;

bigboab
10-29-2003, 10:10 AM
Oh what a beautiful morning
Oh what a beautiful day
The postman has just dropped the bills through
I think I will just run away.

Yogi
10-29-2003, 10:43 AM
Originally posted by bigboab@29 October 2003 - 11:10
Oh what a beautiful morning
Oh what a beautiful day
The postman has just dropped the bills through
I think I will just run away.
Oh, no, don&#39;t run away, my friend
For bills are really so much fun
Fold them into paper plains
A gift from heaven sent

Cos bills are just the biggest fun
when you cut them into pieces, small
they turn into a toy
into a puzzle they will fall

And when all the pieces match again
You stick &#39;m on your wall

Then make a real nice pic of them
Post &#39;m on this forum
So we all can have a ball&#33;&#33;&#33;

sparsely
10-30-2003, 07:09 AM
The coming of White

They are silent among us,
the lone, purposed ones.
Guided by hands and motives too high
to imagine.

They are the shapers,
shape-shifters and nomads.

They pass through tonight
without a sound, or disturbance.
To another part of the Earth.

Pale, dark, small and large.
their constitution remains unshakable,
and we are at their mercy;
curse or blessing.

Endlessly roaming, they come again
causing men to pray and dance and sing.

Holy and unwavering is their devotion to their purpose.
Nothing binds them, and they mind no one.

brotherdoobie
10-30-2003, 07:42 AM
Excuse my brain freeze&#33;


Peace brotherdoobie

brotherdoobie
10-30-2003, 08:05 AM
A black bird sits on a black wire on a bleak day
as I sit on a bare sun bleached bench.

Is this the first cigarette I smoked today?
Or have I always sat here smoking?
I would like to believe no...........

Except the thousand nicotine soaked filters that
cover the ground beneath my feet....Whisper yes.

Usually I would ignore their voices but today
I notice that the bird looks like he could use
a drag off of my cigarette.

I smile and leave him one.



Peace brotherdoobie

Yogi
11-06-2003, 01:24 PM
Autumn leaves in Autumn days

Red and brown and yellow beauty

puts me in a melancholy phase

:rolleyes: Yogi

TheDave
11-06-2003, 01:28 PM
i like pie, i like pie
its the apple in my eye
but idont like apple pie
because it stings my bloody eye :D

Yogi
11-06-2003, 01:32 PM
So when your eye
Is full of apple pie
You may ask why
Is it the apple or the pie that made me cry......

;) Yogi

sparsely
11-07-2003, 12:53 AM
Memories and ambulances
circuit boards and pitch
3852149 + 1 bent trailer hitch.

Crackerjack barndances
firework strings, lined up inside your brain.
crystal chips and menthol lips
quivering with tears of pain.

Plasticene
all
black
serene

Fast asleep
fast
slow to dream

Falling leaves keep me awake.

Lilmiss
11-07-2003, 03:18 PM
Originally posted by SensualGardening@29 October 2003 - 09:20
Thank you lilmiss for explaining why
our "love" in cyberspace &#39;s no lie




no problem my friend,
the truth seemed to bend.
for the problem to mend,
my thoughts i had to send. :D

pusher
11-07-2003, 04:17 PM
I don&#39;t conform
or follow the norm
I hate lines that rhyme
or keep perfect time
Oh woe is me
Crap that makes three
I&#39;ll show myself the door
Dammit this makes four&#33;

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