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supersonic
11-09-2003, 02:38 PM
constructive criticism is accepted! :blink:
take a look @
darksonic.tk (http://darksonic.tk)
tell me what should I change, add, remove ...
thank you!

supersonic
11-10-2003, 01:29 AM
:x >_< DOH&#33; Do I suck that much? :blink:

I.am
11-10-2003, 06:21 AM
Criticism :-):

Whats up with all these partner info (Partner links,buttons) you have?
Disclaimer doesnt need to be on the first page. Place a link to that on your page next to Copyright info.

Get rid of Advertise section. Need for that? You worked on a pre-designed and left that section?
Font for popular sites is too small to read. Make it clear if you can.

The "Note" sitting on the top is sort of hanging out of nowhere. Find a suitable place for it. And what are those two http://supersonic.htmlplanet.com/images/ms.gif
:lol:
I guess if its a personal homepage then fine but if you are aiming towards professionalism touch you need some more changes.

Goodluck&#33; :)

I.am
11-10-2003, 06:24 AM
Just wanted to add:

This section

Copyright 2003 http&#58;//www.DarkSonic.tk All Rights Reserved. &nbsp;
Site Designed by http&#58;//www.quickness.uni.cc. All Rights Reserved.

is not well written. The links in blue are totally unreadable.You should consider changing their color.

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I.am

Billy_Dean
11-10-2003, 06:45 AM
The blue writing needs to go.

I couldn&#39;t read anything in the "popular sites" section.

Disclaimer should be a discreet link.

I would up the font sizes on most things.

I would turn one of these round. http://www.uploadit.org/files2/101103-ms.gif

Just clicked on the "humor" link and can&#39;t read anything, the background is shocking&#33;

Games page was easier to read.

Download page again, blue writing on that background makes it hard to read.

Your site appears to be set at 640 pixels? You should consider expanding this to 800.

A promising site, keep it simple and easy to read or people won&#39;t stay.


:)

supersonic
11-10-2003, 12:31 PM
Thanks for the adive guyz, I will work around all o&#39; these :D

supersonic
11-10-2003, 10:21 PM
Yeps&#33; I&#39;ve made the changes, now the site looks alot better :)