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J'Pol
03-27-2004, 05:43 PM
let me be your vacuum cleaner
breathing in your dust
let me be your ford cortina
i will never rust
if you like your coffee hot
let me be your coffee pot
you call the shots
i wanna be yours

let me be your raincoat
for those frequent rainy days
let me be your dreamboat
when you wanna sail away
let me be your teddy bear
take me with you anywhere
i don’t care
i wanna be yours

let me be your electric meter
i will not run out
let me be the electric heater
you get cold without
let me be your setting lotion
hold your hair with deep devotion
deep as the deep atlantic ocean
that’s how deep is my emotion
deep deep deep deep de deep deep
i don’t wanna be hers
i wanna be yours

FunkyDog
03-27-2004, 05:44 PM
Very nice poem.

100%
03-27-2004, 05:49 PM
Let me be your Plagiarism Controller
and sue you until
your pockets are empty
until you are begging for mercy
for all eternity
happily ever after

J'Pol
03-27-2004, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by Zedaxax@27 March 2004 - 18:49
Let me be your Plagiarism Controller
and sue you until
your pockets are empty
until you are begging for mercy
for all eternity
happily ever after
Please read the thread title, in particular the part ALL IN UPPER CASE.

Yogi
03-27-2004, 05:53 PM
Originally posted by J'Pol@27 March 2004 - 19:43
let me be your vacuum cleaner
breathing in your dust
let me be your ford cortina
i will never rust
if you like your coffee hot
let me be your coffee pot
you call the shots
i wanna be yours

let me be your raincoat
for those frequent rainy days
let me be your dreamboat
when you wanna sail away
let me be your teddy bear
take me with you anywhere
i don’t care
i wanna be yours

let me be your electric meter
i will not run out
let me be the electric heater
you get cold without
let me be your setting lotion
hold your hair with deep devotion
deep as the deep atlantic ocean
that’s how deep is my emotion
deep deep deep deep de deep deep
i don’t wanna be hers
i wanna be yours
:helpsmile:

Is that an offer, J'Pol????


YoPoet

J'Pol
03-27-2004, 05:55 PM
Yocheatgi

You're taken.

Yogi
03-27-2004, 07:53 PM
Originally posted by J'Pol@27 March 2004 - 19:55
Yocheatgi

You're taken.
:helpsmile:


Yo......cheated???