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Ashes of the War is a riveting tale of love and betrayal between two brothers, Enrico and Salvatore Cavare, who both come to love the same woman during the Second World War. Circumstances force them apart until 2 decades later, when Enrico is brutally murdered by Salvatore for stealing the love of his life, Arianna. This circumstance forces Enrico’s sons Frank and Dante apart from one another as they explore the opposite paths of “the law” and “the underworld” to avenge their father’s death. Upon realizing Salvatore’s current success as the head of New York City’s largest organized crime unit, Frank decides that the only way to eliminate Salvatore is by destroying his entire organization from the inside, while Dante joins up with the CIA, in hopes of righteously taking down his father’s killer. The story takes an unexpected turn when both brothers realize that Salvatore is Frank’s biological father.

It's incredibly cliched. The only way it could ever work as a movie is if one brother was a vampire and the other a werewolf.

Where's the manic pixie dream girl role?

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Sounds like something I would watch for sure, sounds like it would make a great movie!

It least you shut up about peeraccess.

BTW, welcome back, neve! What got you thinking about writing a movie?