little help on music

i wrote this in music world but so far no reply....
can some body help me on this.
http://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/n90929-.html

I just found this. Is it any help? :)

Binary Star - One Man Army Lyrics

It's the one man army, general subliminal
Fly through the sky, ready for war with syllables
Literary military, top secret mission
You aint seen nothin' yet, it's like a stealth jet


My mental plane take flight, I air strike the mic
The mystery pilot in the cockpit all night
See how i keep the shows live, i never lost a dog fight
See how my enemies nose dive
The name of my plane is pit bull terrier
Keep my targets locked in, the more the merrier
Over your head when i break the sound barrier
So fly my voice need an aircraft carrier
Travel airwaves, every track is a runway
Keep the jams packed like church on Easter Sunday
Rappers thinking they shall overcome one day
They must be dreaming and I'm lyrical James Earl Ray
It's the one man army


It's the one man army, general subliminal
March across land, ready for war with syllables
Literary military, top secret mission
You aint seen nothin' yet, I roll up on your set


With speed, movin like a German blitz creed
MC's relax ? is comin to get these rhymes
I've got what they missin, in action
stand at attention, military fashion
and listen to the rapper Rambo, the mic commando
fully equipped, i write rhymes with extra ammo
too much to handle, you had the nerve to try and grab the mic
that's like ? trying to fight ?
I'm too marvelous, when I'm droppin' this watch the mic
turn in to a nuclear test site
MC's better heed the word container (why?)
cause we don't need another hero, shima, check it out


it's the one man army, general subliminal
dive in to the water, ready for war with syllables
Literary military, top secret mission
you aint seen nothin' yet, how deep can i get


six thousand leagues beneath MC level
a submarine negro with torpedo steel-o's
my strategies turn MCs into P.O. ----- W.'s
i love to battle other rappers and sink they battle ships
i send them up the creek in they life boats paddelists
salt water navy seals strategists, dive in to your brain waves
the backstroke fabulous, no need to rest if it's shark infested
sonar equipment is a stupid investment
you can't see my style, and I've shown this too many times
I've been in more mission than a homeless
always on point like a compass
three hundred and sixty degrees
All the rhyme MC, it's the one man army


Yo It's the one man army
Yo It's the one man army
one man army, general subliminal
fly through the sky, ready for war with syllables
one man army, general subliminal
march across land, ready for war with syllables
one man army, general subliminal
dive in to the water, ready for war with syllables
binarary military, top secret mission
you aint seen nothin' yet, I roll up on your set
With speed, movin like a german blitz creed
One Man Army in the place to be
Whether flyin' through the sky, on land, or in sea
yo it's the one man army on a mission
it's the one man army on a mission
it's the one man army on a mission
Yeah specialize in warfare's of all kind
one man army, general subliminal
one man army, general subliminal
one man army, general subliminal

that doesnt sound like a RAp song,
thanks anyway

it sounds like a rap song to me :unsure:

Its maybe a grammar thing again. A 'C' in front of it might make it more appropriate. :)