[Venting] It's all so sh*t!!111

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Originally Posted by JPaul

Chebus, did you critique my poetism re manker in a jar. I'd love to know your opinion on it.

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I must have missed that... :unsure:

http://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/showt...3&page=2&pp=10

I went for a simple abcb, nothing too advanced.

I think it works rather well.

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Originally Posted by JPaul

http://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/showt...3&page=2&pp=10

I went for a simple abcb, nothing too advanced.

I think it works rather well.

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I thought it read rather like a verse one might compose on Feb 14th. If Sam^4 could have made a snazzy flash envelope with an appropriate acronym, like POLO or HOLLAND, written upon it then it would have rounded the effort off quite nicely.

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Originally Posted by JPaul

http://filesharingtalk.com/vb3/showt...3&page=2&pp=10

I went for a simple abcb, nothing too advanced.

I think it works rather well.

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I like it. A nice mix of beer, football and manc mocking. :naughty:

I see no-one thought my poetic contribution in the same thread worth a comment?

Bah...philistines, no discussion with regard to my cunning use of colloquial naming to contemporise the reference base?


Or did no one actually get it? :blink:

Sara,

I for one was impressed by the colonic shaming to compromise the referees bees

Dickory Dickory Dock
The mouse ran up the clock
The clock struck one
The mouse got crushed in the machinery. :blink:

Is that prose or poetry?

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Originally Posted by bigboab

Dickory Dickory Dock
The mouse ran up the clock
The clock struck one
The mouse got crushed in the machinery. :blink:

Is that prose or poetry?

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Yes

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Originally Posted by JPaul

Yes

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Thanks for clearing that up. :)

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Originally Posted by bigboab

Thanks for clearing that up. :)

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NP bawbag.