"The Willow and goul" by The Vergent Tallion.

This is the second thread, the first was mocked by childish posters, please excuse them.

My latest work

this is a question to all of you here who decide to read this.

As far as the shadows cast, the enravelling producers fast, even i thy be yourself says i, will welcome any predatory self says thy. When the creatures rest their willowfull wings, their chief calls out and sings, "This willowfull land that follows your wings, seems to be one of many derelict things, "no!" said i, pretrude the mountains and i shall be blessed. As far as you sing, the willowfull will rest.

by The Vergent Tallion

this is a sort of metaphoric question, those who understand it and those who dont please express your views.

What on God's green Earth makes you think this will go any differently.

Post it in the drawing room if you want serious discussion and critique. That's what it's for.

No need to repeat, ffs.

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Originally Posted by Proper Bo

No need to repeat, ffs.

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FFS can't you ever follow this chaps rules.

this is a reasonable forum, so i should be able to communicate with civilised people which you are not,

why are you purposley ruining my thread?, what is your problem?

Post it in the Drawing room, half-wit. That's what it's for.

This is here so people can spam, then they don't have to do it elsewhere.

We can post anything here. Subject to the normal rules of decency and taste.

I have a feeling you're trying to make us do your homework for you.


This an extract of some sorts,isn't it?

It's too difficult to interpret without knowing the context.

Except for old boab, JP and Big Les, who all used to speak auld English when they were weanes, no one else here knows what thay says anyway.

this is outrageous!

i cannot communicate with my fellow posters in a civilised fashion, clearly this thread is of a serious nature,you certainly wouldnt want anyone spamming your thread so why are you doing this to others?

What are you on about?
I asked you a question about the bloody thing!

And also, if you would bother to read any thread in this area, you would know they all get spammed after just about 1 page

That's what we do :huh:

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

,you certainly wouldnt want anyone spamming your thread

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Of course I would, that's what I would have created it for.

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Originally Posted by Skweeky

I have a feeling you're trying to make us do your homework for you.


This an extract of some sorts,isn't it?

It's too difficult to interpret without knowing the context.

Except for old boab, JP and Big Les, who all used to speak auld English when they were weanes, no one else here knows what thay says anyway.

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hello Skweeky,

this is not an extract, it is work of my own. I would describe this as a metaphoric question and not a poem. I wrote this with great thought, i would be happy if you can express your views on this.

EDIT:my previous post was not in relation to yours, but to Sextent, excuse me.

You don't think I would want a serious discussion with these people. There's only about 7 I would even talk to in real life.

I don't know mate.

I love reading and writing, but it's a bit too metaphorical for me.

thats ok Skweeky, i appreciate your time.

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Originally Posted by Sextent

You don't think I would want a serious discussion with these people. There's only about 7 I would even talk to in real life.

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Am I one of them?

I'd better be one of them :angry:

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Originally Posted by Skweeky

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Originally Posted by Sextent

You don't think I would want a serious discussion with these people. There's only about 7 I would even talk to in real life.

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Am I one of them?

I'd better be one of them :angry:

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You know it, don't sound so needy.

You don't appreciate me the way you used to.
You just take me for granted!

:snooty:

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

This is the second thread, the first was mocked by childish posters, please excuse them.

My latest work

this is a question to all of you here who decide to read this.

As far as the shadows cast, the enravelling producers fast, even i thy be yourself says i, will welcome any predatory self says thy. When the creatures rest their willowfull wings, their chief calls out and sings, "This willowfull land that follows your wings, seems to be one of many derelict things, "no!" said i, pretrude the mountains and i shall be blessed. As far as you sing, the willowfull will rest.

by The Vergent Tallion

this is a sort of metaphoric question, those who understand it and those who dont please express your views.

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A metaphoric question, eh?
Looks like an accident happened in a printing firm and the YTS kid tidied up.

Well be fair, I thought I was in with a chance then.

Now you've gone and got all hunned up.

Popping to shop.

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Originally Posted by Chewie

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

This is the second thread, the first was mocked by childish posters, please excuse them.

My latest work

this is a question to all of you here who decide to read this.

As far as the shadows cast, the enravelling producers fast, even i thy be yourself says i, will welcome any predatory self says thy. When the creatures rest their willowfull wings, their chief calls out and sings, "This willowfull land that follows your wings, seems to be one of many derelict things, "no!" said i, pretrude the mountains and i shall be blessed. As far as you sing, the willowfull will rest.

by The Vergent Tallion

this is a sort of metaphoric question, those who understand it and those who dont please express your views.

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A metaphoric question, eh?
Looks like an accident happened in a printing firm and the YTS kid tidied up.

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Double harsh.

Can you bring me a bar of Galaxy?

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Originally Posted by Chewie

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

This is the second thread, the first was mocked by childish posters, please excuse them.

My latest work

this is a question to all of you here who decide to read this.

As far as the shadows cast, the enravelling producers fast, even i thy be yourself says i, will welcome any predatory self says thy. When the creatures rest their willowfull wings, their chief calls out and sings, "This willowfull land that follows your wings, seems to be one of many derelict things, "no!" said i, pretrude the mountains and i shall be blessed. As far as you sing, the willowfull will rest.

by The Vergent Tallion

this is a sort of metaphoric question, those who understand it and those who dont please express your views.

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A metaphoric question, eh?
Looks like an accident happened in a printing firm and the YTS kid tidied up.

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Chewie, why be so childish?

if you simply do not understand it then dont mock it in such a childish manner. This is a intriguing poem to say the least, when you have the intellect to understand it then post some constructive criticism, or is this spam?

i cannot tell the difference, i have copied this thread to "the drawing room" nevertheless.

Is this manker of cheese trying to be funny?

Not sure who it is, doesn't look like their style.

And also Cheese would have made his own eyes bleed if he had typed that.

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

i have copied this thread to "the drawing room" nevertheless.

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She has too.

Even in light of my ignorance of Old(e) English I fear a decent parsing would obliterate it.

It looks ready to collapse from it's own pretense, actually. :whistling

It's a joke, mate.

Not one of mine btw.

You may both think that you are rather quite intelligent however when you are faced with something you cannot understand you ramble like children. Post serious comments about this on "the drawing room" you just left.

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

You may both think that you are rather quite intelligent however when you are faced with something you cannot understand you ramble like children. Post serious comments about this on "the drawing room" you just left.

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Fuck off and die, soon.

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Originally Posted by Agrajag

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

You may both think that you are rather quite intelligent however when you are faced with something you cannot understand you ramble like children. Post serious comments about this on "the drawing room" you just left.

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Fuck off and die, soon.

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i have seen many people here use words like the above when they have felt "defeated", you are pathetic like others ive seen here, i was beginning to enjoy talking to you in "the drawing room".

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

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Originally Posted by Agrajag

Fuck off and die, soon.

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i have seen many people here use words like the above when they have felt "defeated", you are pathetic like others ive seen here, i was beginning to enjoy talking to you in "the drawing room".

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Are you not dead yet you condescending prick.

calm down, young one.

Also dont forget to use the question mark on your keyboard, its there for a reason.

As is the apostrophe key.

Is this prick still posting, I put him on ignore ages ago.

h4r5h:cry:

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Originally Posted by Proper Bo

h4r5h:cry:

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Fair tho', I've got better things to do that listen to a condescending, semi-literate half-wit with delusions of adequacy.

No offence like Bo.

yeah, well that's just your opinion or something.

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Originally Posted by Mr JP Fugley

Is this prick still posting, I put him on ignore ages ago.

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you seem to have have gone "off" and "on", that makes no sense. I wouldnt say you "ignored" me when you posted in three of my threads.

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Originally Posted by mr.mystery

calm down, young one.

Also dont forget to use the question mark on your keyboard, its there for a reason.

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Billy! :whistling