Poem Help! ! !

[KinkoStinky]

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[KinkoStinky]

Hey LecentiousBastard, you can always try to make your girl smile!

[Z]

also, dont use CULTIVATOR and second, you should write it yourself, cheapskate!

[LecentiousBastard]

I never said i was posting i was doing i for a friend...which i don't like...so it is ok..also it is a rare term...and it does mean helper....Dictionary.com definition 5 +6, it is just rare, common = farming

[Z]

so then she wont know if the definition u want is not common! use some sense man. cultivator just sounds weird, unless shes really into gardening. and even then...use thesaurus.com or microsoft word to help u. really, dont use that word!

also, if you dont like the guy, just give him mine!

[KinkoStinky]

Originally posted by LecentiousBastard@18 April 2003 - 21:56
I never said i was posting i was doing i for a friend...which i don't like...so it is ok..also it is a rare term...and it does mean helper....Dictionary.com definition 5 +6, it is just rare, common = farming

So you are trying to help a friend you dont like?

[Skweeky]

ok, erm...I'm not english, but I love poetry, so I just gave it a go:

Can it be true?
Unabeted love between me and you..
Like the sound of
Tiny tinkling chrystals
Is your voice
Vacuity, when you are not here
All my being is nothing but love for you
Through the gates of hell
Or the golden doors of heaven
Rest assure, my love, I'll be there for you.....

[LecentiousBastard]

That isn't bad but fi it rhymed it would be better

[Riddler]

Crazed and damaged I've become
Unthinkable, but God it's true
Love has warped this steady soul
Taken all of me for you
Is this the end of me ?
Voices, shadows in my head
Are they what's left of me ?
Then take my heart unbled
Or brush me with your love....
Rescue me instead.

[Skweeky]

Originally posted by LecentiousBastard@19 April 2003 - 14:33
That isn't bad but fi it rhymed it would be better

yeah...but I don't like poems that rhyme....they look, I don't know, childish in a way...