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School boy errors he'd call it.Originally Posted by mbucari1
I've fixed your mistakes. There were only two mistakes in that short sentence.
I think.
Hey I should post any news threads I come up with here for editing/proofreading.
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Frog Shoulder
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Fish in a barrell.I've fixed your mistakes. There were only two mistakes in that short sentence.
"there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "
übercool
Did you mean Bunnell there?
Frog Shoulder
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Nope, I have no idea what that means.
"there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "
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So...does a comma appear before the word 'but'?
ex. "I did everything she told me, but I ran out of time for the extra stuff."
I swear to god I've seen both and last time I did grammar was...well...its not even worth mentioning because no one concentrates on it anymore.
Least not where I'm from.True story.
I should probably pay more attention to the books I read...
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Frog Shoulder
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It depends.
"there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "
Poster
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Yes, I did. I changed the comma after "Why" to a question mark, Capitalized the i in "it" and fixed the spelling of "sence". Those are technically three things, but I consider the capitalization of the "i" a part of changing the comma to a question mark.
Your example sentence is correct. Compound sentences join one or more independent clauses joined by a conjunction (which may or may not be preceded by comma) or a semicolon.
ex. "I did everything she told me, but I ran out of time for the extra stuff."
I swear to god I've seen both and last time I did grammar was...well...its not even worth mentioning because no one concentrates on it anymore.
So...does
Least not where I'm from.
I should probably pay more attention to the books I read...
Frog Shoulder
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Nazi
"there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "
Poster
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Du Arschloch
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...guide to English language - so get the fuck out
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