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    Analyse this

    Quote Originally Posted by some guy
    FST lounge is a place full of fun,
    I told you i was black, what a cun,
    Some people cant smile. Some people can,
    Some are here for gossip, some just for spam.
    Like scouring a thesaurus,
    I've found the clitoros,
    I've made friends, i've made foes,
    When will i stop, nobody knows.
    Some think i'm an arse, some say i'm gay,
    Either way gents, i'm here to stay.
    "there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
    i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "

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    It's bloody awful.

    If it took anything over 20 seconds to write then the "author" should be thoroughly ashamed of themselves.
    Last edited by Cheese; 06-22-2007 at 01:52 PM.

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    That's what I thought but I'm not an expert.

    I hate people who say they've written a poem, think it's funny, then do a recitation consisting of about 63 associated limericks about funny stuff that happened to victim of said "poem".

    Cunts.
    "there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
    i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "

  4. Lounge   -   #4
    everyone's a critic. If any of you knew me, you'd know i write poetry every day. Some people write about their days in diaries, i put it into poems.

    Because it took less than 60 secs to write, diesnt mean it's shite.
    I am very sharp and think quick. But analyze away, you d....

    xx

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    Your clever use of the aabbccddee was indeed spectacular. As were the rhymes in vernacular.
    "there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
    i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "

  6. Lounge   -   #6
    vernacular is always spectacular.
    Thing of me as a word dracular.
    FACTULAR!

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    Your thing is a vampire.

    That's actually caused by something else mate, it's a burd thing.
    "there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
    i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "

  8. Lounge   -   #8
    what, hitting you repeatedly with a blunt object?

    Or a pigeon who nests and feasts amongst cherry orchards?

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    Your thing is blunt. FFS you really are weird, what with your shiny arse and blunt thing.
    "there is nothing misogynistic about anything, stop trippin.
    i type this way because im black and from nyc chill son "

  10. Lounge   -   #10
    i'm my own person, and comfortable with that. I never said i had a waxed arse. I was asking that matthewa person id she does. Cell block H like.

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