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“THE MEGALITH”
“The Gate of Aasa, Päike, and The Journey of The Prince
The Slayer of Dragons”
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in to the sky like megalithic pillars. It seemes as if a small cloud filly had just skipped behind the left tower.
KING TÕIVULEMB
(continuing, amazed, to a trader)
Did you see it, behind the Tall Inn?
He looks up. A heard of thirty-three white cloud-mustangs is galloping the expanse. The filly hops out from behind the tower tries to keep up with the herd. The herd soon settles to eat cloud grass. A plethora of cloud animals appears: fish, bigger fish, a fox playing with a mouse, A whale, dolphins and some creatures we would have no name for. They are engaged in a sweeping game of life.
Suddenly the clouds are a big mouth of sharp teeth, a dragon, that swallows up the play, lightening bellow at the people of the town from the dark thunderstorm monster dilating and whirling its lizard-like body in a whirlwind. Darkness, rain and twisters sweep in the town. Chaos is loose at the City Square.
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CUT OUT
The gathered hundreds of thousands bring forth an exclamation in quintessence.
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Originally Posted by Barbarossa
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