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Thread: "The Willow and goul" by The Vergent Tallion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skweeky View Post
    I have a feeling you're trying to make us do your homework for you.


    This an extract of some sorts,isn't it?

    It's too difficult to interpret without knowing the context.

    Except for old boab, JP and Big Les, who all used to speak auld English when they were weanes, no one else here knows what thay says anyway.
    hello Skweeky,

    this is not an extract, it is work of my own. I would describe this as a metaphoric question and not a poem. I wrote this with great thought, i would be happy if you can express your views on this.

    EDIT:my previous post was not in relation to yours, but to Sextent, excuse me.
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    You don't think I would want a serious discussion with these people. There's only about 7 I would even talk to in real life.

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    I don't know mate.

    I love reading and writing, but it's a bit too metaphorical for me.

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    thats ok Skweeky, i appreciate your time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sextent View Post
    You don't think I would want a serious discussion with these people. There's only about 7 I would even talk to in real life.


    Am I one of them?

    I'd better be one of them

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skweeky View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Sextent View Post
    You don't think I would want a serious discussion with these people. There's only about 7 I would even talk to in real life.


    Am I one of them?

    I'd better be one of them
    You know it, don't sound so needy.

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    You don't appreciate me the way you used to.
    You just take me for granted!


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    Quote Originally Posted by mr.mystery View Post
    This is the second thread, the first was mocked by childish posters, please excuse them.

    My latest work

    this is a question to all of you here who decide to read this.

    As far as the shadows cast, the enravelling producers fast, even i thy be yourself says i, will welcome any predatory self says thy. When the creatures rest their willowfull wings, their chief calls out and sings, "This willowfull land that follows your wings, seems to be one of many derelict things, "no!" said i, pretrude the mountains and i shall be blessed. As far as you sing, the willowfull will rest.

    by The Vergent Tallion

    this is a sort of metaphoric question, those who understand it and those who dont please express your views.
    A metaphoric question, eh?
    Looks like an accident happened in a printing firm and the YTS kid tidied up.
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    Well be fair, I thought I was in with a chance then.

    Now you've gone and got all hunned up.

    Popping to shop.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chewie View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by mr.mystery View Post
    This is the second thread, the first was mocked by childish posters, please excuse them.

    My latest work

    this is a question to all of you here who decide to read this.

    As far as the shadows cast, the enravelling producers fast, even i thy be yourself says i, will welcome any predatory self says thy. When the creatures rest their willowfull wings, their chief calls out and sings, "This willowfull land that follows your wings, seems to be one of many derelict things, "no!" said i, pretrude the mountains and i shall be blessed. As far as you sing, the willowfull will rest.

    by The Vergent Tallion

    this is a sort of metaphoric question, those who understand it and those who dont please express your views.
    A metaphoric question, eh?
    Looks like an accident happened in a printing firm and the YTS kid tidied up.
    Double harsh.

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