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Thread: Poetic Lounge Challenge

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    Yogi's Avatar Super Undulator
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    Since my poetic efforts are so widely "appreciated" here........., i could do with
    some help.

    Rules: Duh.....

    Let's try to do it in AA-BB-A

    Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
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    Please????
    Yogi

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    Everywhere shines the sun, but here

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    i'd rather be in belgium drinking beer

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    Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
    Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
    An example of the first three lines,
    i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
    and forget my hidden fears,

    .....................................................

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    and wander of in timeless times

    (AA BAAB then?)

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    Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 00:46
    Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
    Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
    An example of the first three lines,
    i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
    and forget my hidden fears,

    and wander off in timeless times
    just the sound of crockets and chimes
    .....................................................


    (AA BAAB then?) Sure! Whatever makes us happy!!

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    But flying low to pay for my crimes


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    Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 00:46
    Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
    Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
    An example of the first three lines,
    i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
    and forget my hidden fears,

    A and wander off in timeless times
    A just the sound of crockets and chimes
    A But flying low to pay for my crimes(You?? Jonno?????.....)
    B ..............................................
    A .............................................

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    singing timeless rhymes
    of the past i left behind

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    @SG.......Whaaaaat??

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