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Super Undulator
Since my poetic efforts are so widely "appreciated" here........., i could do with
some help.
Rules: Duh.....
Let's try to do it in AA-BB-A
Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
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Please????
Yogi
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10-27-2003, 11:41 PM
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Manker's web totty
Everywhere shines the sun, but here
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10-27-2003, 11:44 PM
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10-27-2003, 11:46 PM
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Super Undulator
Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
An example of the first three lines,
i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
and forget my hidden fears,
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10-27-2003, 11:50 PM
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Manker's web totty
and wander of in timeless times
(AA BAAB then?)
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10-27-2003, 11:53 PM
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Super Undulator
Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 00:46
Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
An example of the first three lines,
i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
and forget my hidden fears,
and wander off in timeless times
just the sound of crockets and chimes
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(AA BAAB then?) Sure! Whatever makes us happy!!
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10-27-2003, 11:53 PM
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But flying low to pay for my crimes
Jonno B)
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10-27-2003, 11:56 PM
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Super Undulator
Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 00:46
Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
An example of the first three lines,
i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
and forget my hidden fears,
A and wander off in timeless times
A just the sound of crockets and chimes
A But flying low to pay for my crimes(You?? Jonno?????.....)
B ..............................................
A .............................................
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10-27-2003, 11:57 PM
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cawk
BT Rep: +4
singing timeless rhymes
of the past i left behind
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10-27-2003, 11:59 PM
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Like rage filled thoughs in a saddend mind
@SG.......Whaaaaat??
Jonno B)
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