Poetic Lounge Challenge 2!(lite-version++)

[Yogi]

Wow, Lilmiss, is this true
Feel those vibes come throug??

I'm not sure and somewhat shy
UKman is really such a guy

But there's really thingz to tell
Me allready relationwise quite well

Though our connection may be clear And we think eachother dear

It'll just be here,
the lounge, our cyberflow
Our virtua-kisses will forever glow....................

[bigboab]

This was written with someones heartbreak in mind


Down through the years, love's brought us tears
Through death and tragedy
With that in mind, I'll try and find
A word of sympathy.

Adam and Eve, the first to mind
The leaders of them all
Till an apple tempted them
It led to their downfall,


Then Hero and Leander
Their love was sealed by Fates
When the water swallowed him
In the Dardanellae straits.

There was Philemon and Baucis
They could not be separated
So they ended up as a pair of trees
As Zeus and Hermes stated.

Pyrams and Thisbe had to flee
Their love was not consented
Pyramus died by his own sword
Thisbe died demented.

Samson loved Delilah true
He was at her beck and call
She cut his hair till he was bare
It nearly was his downfall

Antony had his Cleo true
But off to war he went
Cleo's heart was broke in two
So an asp was heaven sent.

Romeo love Juliet
Their families were not so keen though
So they made a pact to end it all
It was so sad to see them go.

Robin had his merry men
He also had Maid Marian
The Sheriff tried to thwart it all
Because he was loves rapscallion.

Victoria had her Albert true
He died when they were younger
It so broke her heart to be apart
That she dressed in black forever.

More up to date Titanic came
The ending was a shocker
But the worst of all, along came Paul
To banish the love of Clocker

BBKL2003







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[Yogi]

Oh, me, oh, my,

This is soooo sad

And though the rhyme is not half bad

I wish thee follow up with cheer

Cos us poets like it joyous here......


MOOOHOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

[UKMan]

yeegads bigboab may i say,
your pen is quick this very day,
those tales thee tell of olden passion,
may never ever go out of fashion.

allthough so sad of love thee tell,
its true love is a living hell,
salute thee i do willingly,
but love is all that makes us free.

Peace
UKMan

[bigboab]

Originally posted by UKMan@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But Clocker's young
You better duck below the dung

[Yogi]

Originally posted by bigboab+28 October 2003 - 22:43--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bigboab @ 28 October 2003 - 22:43)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-UKMan@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But has Clocker seen this line of yours? [/b][/quote]
RHYME-ALERT: to BigBoab we should say
Make it rhyme or spoil our day
But we know thee edit soon
Or you are a big buffoon.............

[bigboab]

Although I try to make it rhyme
I cannot do it all the time
If you try to make me change my verse
I will come right in and kick your erse* ( *Scottish for arse)

[UKMan]

Originally posted by SensualGardening+28 October 2003 - 23:02--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SensualGardening @ 28 October 2003 - 23:02)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>

Originally posted by bigboab@28 October 2003 - 22:43
<!--QuoteBegin-UKMan

@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But has Clocker seen this line of yours?

RHYME-ALERT: to BigBoab we should say
Make it rhyme or spoil our day
But we know thee edit soon
Or you are a big buffoon............. [/b][/quote]
the rules of poetry engaged,
have made SensualGardening somewhat enraged,
bigboab returned to make his plea,
and made a pitch which all agree,
t&#39;was swift and blunt if truth was said,
but now farewell - tis time for bed.

Peace
UKMan

[bigboab]

Originally posted by UKMan+28 October 2003 - 22:18--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (UKMan @ 28 October 2003 - 22:18)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>

Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 23:02

Originally posted by bigboab@28 October 2003 - 22:43
<!--QuoteBegin-UKMan

@28 October 2003 - 21:30
those tales thee tell of olden passion,

Thank you kind sir. But has Clocker seen this line of yours?

RHYME-ALERT: to BigBoab we should say
Make it rhyme or spoil our day
But we know thee edit soon
Or you are a big buffoon.............

the rules of poetry engaged,
have made SensualGardening somewhat enraged,
bigboab returned to make his plea,
and made a pitch which all agree,
t&#39;was swift and blunt if truth was said,
but now farewell - tis time for bed.

Peace
UKMan [/b][/quote]
Ukman fights for what is right.
Let us all just say good night

[Yogi]

Originally posted by bigboab@28 October 2003 - 23:09
Although I try to make it rhyme
I cannot do it all the time
If you try to make me change my verse
I will come right in and kick your erse* ( *Scottish for arse)

Oh, you mighty boab, what a verse,
Would you really, really like to kick my erse,

That might really come in handy
Cos my hammeroids feel quite dandy.........

Yogi