Poetic Lounge Challenge 2!(lite-version++)

**sparsely** · 10-29-2003, 03:28 AM

thanks for saying so...
wish I had music for it, but I'm not really inclined that way I guess. Though I do hear music as I'm drifting off to sleep, and it's
not any I've heard anywhere else.
I just don't have the talent to convert it.

**silent VI** · 10-29-2003, 04:27 AM

feel in love wit ya
The minute I met ya
Your eyes shone like jewels,how could i forget ya.
You the queen me the jester,did my part 2 impress,
though i was never second best still put to your test.
And nothing felt better than your breath on my chest,my true real inspiration to get me otta this mess.
Thank god im blessed,let me guard her even after my death,fot true love manifests beyond the measures of depth.
Yes my elegant lady love gift from above,perfect posture and stance,like you was created to dance,lost in your trance addicted to your wild romance shoered wit affection girl give me a chance just to explain how you kept my soul tame my life in perspective on the track and right lane ,somehow kept me sane when this worlds gone mad so im happy to let u know why i feel so glad
your that one sweet missus that i had 2 have got me walking wit my head up feeling big n bad ;so from my heart 2 my unborn i swear love etrnal and to u my wild romance.

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**Yogi** · 10-29-2003, 09:20 AM

Ah, Well, goodmorning to you all!!
Let's have some more poetic ball

Thank you lilmiss for explaining why
our "love" in cyberspace 's no lie

But not just for eachother
Alas all poets are our brother(!?)

We are not selfish by all means
So we share our lovin' screens

Mwah, this rhyme is really sucking
so before you all start ducking

I ask again you all

Keep this poetry glowing

Let the sun shine, be it fall

And though the winter will be showing

Be a real poetic troll!!

**bigboab** · 10-29-2003, 10:10 AM

Oh what a beautiful morning
Oh what a beautiful day
The postman has just dropped the bills through
I think I will just run away.

**Yogi** · 10-29-2003, 10:43 AM

Originally posted by bigboab@29 October 2003 - 11:10
Oh what a beautiful morning
Oh what a beautiful day
The postman has just dropped the bills through
I think I will just run away.

Oh, no, don't run away, my friend
For bills are really so much fun
Fold them into paper plains
A gift from heaven sent

Cos bills are just the biggest fun
when you cut them into pieces, small
they turn into a toy
into a puzzle they will fall

And when all the pieces match again
You stick 'm on your wall

Then make a real nice pic of them
Post 'm on this forum
So we all can have a ball!!!

**sparsely** · 10-30-2003, 07:09 AM

The coming of White

They are silent among us,
the lone, purposed ones.
Guided by hands and motives too high
to imagine.

They are the shapers,
shape-shifters and nomads.

They pass through tonight
without a sound, or disturbance.
To another part of the Earth.

Pale, dark, small and large.
their constitution remains unshakable,
and we are at their mercy;
curse or blessing.

Endlessly roaming, they come again
causing men to pray and dance and sing.

Holy and unwavering is their devotion to their purpose.
Nothing binds them, and they mind no one.

**brotherdoobie** · 10-30-2003, 07:42 AM

Excuse my brain freeze!

Peace brotherdoobie

**brotherdoobie** · 10-30-2003, 08:05 AM

A black bird sits on a black wire on a bleak day
as I sit on a bare sun bleached bench.

Is this the first cigarette I smoked today?
Or have I always sat here smoking?
I would like to believe no...........

Except the thousand nicotine soaked filters that
cover the ground beneath my feet....Whisper yes.

Usually I would ignore their voices but today
I notice that the bird looks like he could use
a drag off of my cigarette.

I smile and leave him one.

Peace brotherdoobie