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    write some metaphor poems

    heres my pick

    My brother is a killer whale.
    He is huge and scary
    with tatts, long hair & beard.
    But underneath he is meek
    spending time in the garden
    and around the house
    socialising with the ones
    he loves
    giving my cousins rides
    upon his back.
    Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.

    you try

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    thats good it reminds me of being a kid.

    i cant think of any though

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    My brother is a killer whale.
    He is huge and scary
    with tatts, long hair & beard.
    But underneath he is meek
    spending time in the garden
    and around the house
    socialising with the ones
    he loves
    giving my cousins rides
    upon his back.
    Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.

    My son is a bat.
    His eyes blink when darkness comes.
    His body stirs with life.
    His limbs gorge with blood
    as he sets out through the cave of night
    his roof the stars
    the moon a big white eye watching.
    Attracted by the false lights
    he mingles with his batty friends
    weaving in and out of nightclubs
    endless parties
    each otherís places
    till sensing the sudden ebb
    of darkness
    he flutters home
    a cloaked Dracula
    to the hollow of his room
    where he will sleep all day.


    My mum is a general.
    She stalks through the house
    telling me what to do.
    She then sleeps throughout the night.
    But when she wakes up.....
    her medals clanking, stars shining
    & roars us to attention
    she barks orders as she charges
    through the house:
    " Lisa, do the dishes ! "
    " Lisa, clean your room ! "
    then crawls back to her bedroom
    while we, her dutiful soldiers
    carry out her orders.

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    Originally posted by TheDave@4 December 2003 - 01:09
    No The

    I'm not that quick.

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    Originally posted by J&#39;Pol+4 December 2003 - 00:10--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (J&#39;Pol @ 4 December 2003 - 00:10)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TheDave@4 December 2003 - 01:09
    No The

    I&#39;m not that quick. [/b][/quote]
    i know

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    Do you think Linda does, cos she wrote the extended metaphor poem about My Brother is a Killer Whale.

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    people who speak in metaphors,
    want shot with a baw of their own sh*te














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    Or Lisa who wrote My Mum

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    im confused.

    who wrote the poem

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