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Poster
write some metaphor poems
heres my pick
My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
you try
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12-04-2003, 12:07 AM
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n00b
thats good it reminds me of being a kid.
i cant think of any though
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12-04-2003, 12:08 AM
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My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
My son is a bat.
His eyes blink when darkness comes.
His body stirs with life.
His limbs gorge with blood
as he sets out through the cave of night
his roof the stars
the moon a big white eye watching.
Attracted by the false lights
he mingles with his batty friends
weaving in and out of nightclubs
endless parties
each other’s places
till sensing the sudden ebb
of darkness
he flutters home
a cloaked Dracula
to the hollow of his room
where he will sleep all day.
My mum is a general.
She stalks through the house
telling me what to do.
She then sleeps throughout the night.
But when she wakes up.....
her medals clanking, stars shining
& roars us to attention
she barks orders as she charges
through the house:
" Lisa, do the dishes ! "
" Lisa, clean your room ! "
then crawls back to her bedroom
while we, her dutiful soldiers
carry out her orders.
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12-04-2003, 12:09 AM
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n00b
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12-04-2003, 12:10 AM
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Poster
Originally posted by TheDave@4 December 2003 - 01:09
No The
I'm not that quick.
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12-04-2003, 12:11 AM
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n00b
Originally posted by J'Pol+4 December 2003 - 00:10--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (J'Pol @ 4 December 2003 - 00:10)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TheDave@4 December 2003 - 01:09
No The
I'm not that quick. [/b][/quote]
i know
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12-04-2003, 12:13 AM
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Poster
Do you think Linda does, cos she wrote the extended metaphor poem about My Brother is a Killer Whale.
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12-04-2003, 12:13 AM
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Forum Star
people who speak in metaphors,
want shot with a baw of their own sh*te
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12-04-2003, 12:15 AM
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Poster
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12-04-2003, 12:15 AM
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n00b
im confused.
who wrote the poem
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