I Want To Try Being...

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Originally posted by Adster@2 April 2004 - 16:02
a song I wrote

My dog is dead
and nothing else can be said
It's blood spilling out
It's guts out on the road with out a doubt

dead dog dead dog

blah blah!!!!!!!!!!!!

dead dog dead dog

you interested in a music label B)

[tralalala]

thats gross... lol


heres a start of a song im making up:


"i love you, you love me, and everybody knows that we were meant to be
so please, dont hold back, and letsgo together back into our shack..."

does that sound ok??


Rafi

[WOX]

Originally posted by tralalala+2 April 2004 - 15:03--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tralalala @ 2 April 2004 - 15:03)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-WOX@2 April 2004 - 17:01
and what do you think the name should be.

"Bli-Bla-Blu"


Rafi [/b][/quote]
nice name i know this will be a great hit.

[WOX]

Originally posted by tralalala@2 April 2004 - 15:06
thats gross... lol


heres a start of a song im making up:


"i love you, you love me, and everybody knows that we were meant to be
so please, dont hold back, and letsgo together back into our shack..."

does that sound ok??


Rafi

well depending the music that will go with this lyrics.

[tralalala]

Originally posted by WOX+2 April 2004 - 17:08--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (WOX @ 2 April 2004 - 17:08)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tralalala@2 April 2004 - 15:06
thats gross... lol


heres a start of a song im making up:


"i love you, you love me, and everybody knows that we were meant to be
so please, dont hold back, and letsgo together back into our shack..."

does that sound ok??


Rafi

well depending the music that will go with this lyrics. [/b][/quote]
nah, im talking about the lyrics generally... do they sound good?


Rafi

[Adster]

another song I wrote quickly

I want to beat you down you slut you whore

You fucked me up too many times

just like how this song rhymes

so you piss me off and stab my heart with a knife
that tells me love is a sack of shit that is better off being lit

Chorus

I feel Sick you fucked up bitch

You screwed my life you screwed me over I hope you choke and die

[Adster]

heres another song

tra la la la la la tra la la la la

chorsus

tra tra tra tra la la la la

[tralalala]

thats not a very nice song adster...

Rafi

[tralalala]

Originally posted by Adster@2 April 2004 - 17:12
heres another song

tra la la la la la tra la la la la

chorsus

tra tra tra tra la la la la

[WOX]

Originally posted by tralalala+2 April 2004 - 15:13--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tralalala @ 2 April 2004 - 15:13)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Adster@2 April 2004 - 17:12
heres another song

tra la la la la la tra la la la la

chorsus

tra tra tra tra la la la la

[/b][/quote]
damn that will beat cristina aguilera.