I like it. I'm wondering if using a full-stop at the end instead of a comma would be more effective. I'm not just being picky, I just think it would make each couplet stand out more as a statement.
I like cleaniness, but I hate cleaning.
I like winning, but I hate seeing people lose.
I like peace, but I hate silence.
I like order, but I hate routine.
I like choice, but I hate decisions.
I like to get to know people, but I hate conversation.
I like help, but I hate being open.
I like solitude, but I hate lonliness.
I like company, but I hate people.
I love life, but I hate living.
The jury is out on that one.
Good poem though.
Edit: This board really sucks for placing smilies by the way...
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