A Poem of Sorts

[DarthInsinuate]

Walking Contradiction (as Green Day put it)

I like cleaniness, but I hate cleaning,
I like winning, but I hate seeing people lose,
I like peace, but I hate silence,
I like order, but I hate routine,
I like choice, but I hate decisions,
I like to get to know people, but I hate conversation,
I like help, but I hate being open,
I like solitude, but I hate lonliness,
I like company, but I hate people,
I love life, but I hate living.


this is a collection of my thoughts and emotions over the last couple of weeks, i'm just a bit stressed and need to sort my head out

does this work as a poem? i tried to make each line progressively darker, did that come through?

[manker]

Walking Contradiction (as Green Day put it)

I like cleaniness, but I hate cleaning,
I like winning, but I hate seeing people lose,
I like peace, but I hate silence,
I like order, but I hate routine,
I like choice, but I hate decisions,
I like to get to know people, but I hate conversation,
I like help, but I hate being open,
I like solitude, but I hate lonliness,
I like company, but I hate people,
I love life, but I hate living.


this is a collection of my thoughts and emotions over the last couple of weeks, i'm just a bit stressed and need to sort my head out

does this work as a poem? i tried to make each line progressively darker, did that come through?

I like it a lot! It definitely works for me and it did come through, I hate poems that rhyme.

However I hope you're not truly feeling all of these things but that they represent some of the feelings you have about moving away.

To follow your theme; the poem compelled me to reply yet in general I'm apathetic toward poetry.

[*goddess*]

I thought it was pretty good.


Could have it wrong, but it kind of sums up life doesn't it? Full of contradictions, both within ourselves and in everyday life?

[ziggyjuarez]

works just fine.very just ok.

[*goddess*]

Juxtaposing if you will.

Shouldn't use big nasty words like that when it's getting late and I'm drugged up.

But yes, I guess that's correct.

[manker]

It worked for me.

It worked for manker.

It must be good.

Coz he's an accountant.

Now that would have worked a lot better if the first letter of your impression of my profession didn't require an appending of the indefinite article.

It took me a while to get it

[*goddess*]

Least he didn't go for the easier option of using the obvious Wanker

[manker]

Least he didn't go for the easier option of using the obvious Wanker

Hiya, Goddess. Do you like me new sig?

[*goddess*]

Hiya, Goddess. Do you like me new sig?

I hadn't really noticed, but it's very cool.

Did Sam4 help ya with that?


Grrrrrrr, bloody visitor.

[manker]

That's enough talk of sacrificing accountants.

There was holy hell to pay recently at the merest hints of chastising chavs and the warming of a Wiccan.


Btw,