senior project paper, please read

[Afronaut]

Dude, you need to learn all the keys on the keyboard, you missing the Enter and the Shift a lot.

Look at this:

The introduction needs alot of work but the idea that priacy is gradual is good. No one is born a pirate.

Most of the pirated material is available to just about anyone with an internet connection as you stated with the numerous sites and p2p apps.

The title is a little vague, it doesn't say what piracy effects, unless you mean everything which is a huge topic and won't have time to finish (less that a few hours to go).

The structure of the paper needs work to since it seems you have alot of sentence fragments.

Looks better, no?

Much easier to read at least.





I hope the Author of the first post would fix his post.

[spirex]

i need to buy a new keyboard

[DDRFREAK1030]

well i tried my best i sent it to her

hopefully it got through.

wheni tried to send it, it said it was a fuking virus!!!!!!!!!!!!

im all no0000000000000000!!!!!!!!!!!!

i sent it at 8:57pm

hopefully it got through

[i copied and pasted it from M$ Word, i had no time to fix it because i was in class for sixth period and the teacher hella strich about internet]

[brotherdoobie]

well i tried my best i sent it to her

hopefully it got through.

wheni tried to send it, it said it was a fuking virus!!!!!!!!!!!!

im all no0000000000000000!!!!!!!!!!!!

i sent it at 8:57pm

hopefully it got through

[i copied and pasted it from M$ Word, i had no time to fix it because i was in class for sixth period and the teacher hella strich about internet]

Good luck....You're going to need it.

Peace bd

[sArA]

So glad you decided to take the largely good advice of the forum members and actually change it

[manker]

He probably doesn't want to know what I thought of that

[sArA]

You would, I am sure make similar points to those already stated, but perhaps with a slightly more acidic tone...

You, dear manker...would probably have made him cry....