Poetic Lounge Challenge

[Skweeky]

Still I find no peace in my soul
And maybe that's better, on the whole

[Yogi]

Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
An example of the first three lines,
i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
and forget my hidden fears,

A and wander off in timeless times
A just the sound of crockets and chimes
A But flying low to pay for my crimes
B on the times i leave behind
A .I'm singing timeless rhymes

A All my sins have already been fined
B Still, I find no peace in my soul
A Like rage filled thoughs in a saddend mind
B Still ,no peace, no soul
C And maybe for the better, on the whole

I'd sell tomorrow, to be with you, just to chase you,
A tip-toed, lightly footed dandelion thief,
We would just roll our eyes and think of things to fool them,
I'm sure we would talk forever.
...........................................

So you finish this one, zkwieki??





This is going to be epic!!!!

[JONNO_CELEBS]

sorry me fik, whats the A B C thing???

@SG.......Nah.....Never got caught........I mean never done that

Jonno B)

[mrcall1969]

I'd sell tomorrow, to be with you, just to chase you,
A tip-toed, lightly footed dandelion thief,
We would just roll our eyes and think of things to fool them,
I'm sure we would talk forever.

[Skweeky]

Jonno, the ABC thing is called a rhyme scheme

every letter represents a rhyme sound

e.g fined/behind A
crime/time B
spheres/beers C
BUT mind/fined A

get the idea?

[Yogi]

Originally posted by Skweeky@28 October 2003 - 01:13
Jonno, the ABC thing is called a rhyme scheme

every letter represents a rhyme sound

e.g fined/behind A
crime/time B
spheres/beers C
BUT mind/fined A

get the idea?

Thanks, Squeek!!

[Yogi]

Originally posted by mrcall1969@28 October 2003 - 01:11
I'd sell tomorrow, to be with you, just to chase you,
A tip-toed, lightly footed dandelion thief,
We would just roll our eyes and think of things to fool them,
I'm sure we would talk forever.

One line each, please.........

[JONNO_CELEBS]

erm Yeah TY, ok I'll let someone else go cos I don't know how to follow



Jonno B)

[Skweeky]

Originally posted by SensualGardening+28 October 2003 - 01:24--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SensualGardening &#064; 28 October 2003 - 01:24)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-mrcall1969@28 October 2003 - 01:11
I&#39;d sell tomorrow, to be with you, just to chase you,
A tip-toed, lightly footed dandelion thief,
We would just roll our eyes and think of things to fool them,
I&#39;m sure we would talk forever.

One line each, please......... [/b][/quote]
but he wrote that for me, so it&#39;s allowed


anyway:

Can we stay in this moment forever?
Is time our enemy once again?

[Yogi]

Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
Everywhere shines the sun, but here &#39;s
An example of the first three lines,
i&#39;d rather be in belgium drinking beers,
and forget my hidden fears,

A and wander off in timeless times
A just the sound of crockets and chimes
A But flying low to pay for my crimes
B on the times i leave behind
A .I&#39;m singing timeless rhymes

A All my sins have already been fined
B Still, I find no peace in my soul
A Like rage filled thoughs in a saddend mind
B Still ,no peace, no soul
C And maybe for the better, on the whole

I&#39;d sell tomorrow, to be with you, just to chase you,
A tip-toed, lightly footed dandelion thief,
We would just roll our eyes and think of things to fool them,
I&#39;m sure we would talk forever.
Can we stay in this moment forever?
Is time our enemy once again?


Let&#39;s call that poetic freedom.........