Page 4 of 5 FirstFirst 12345 LastLast
Results 31 to 40 of 41

Thread: Poetic Lounge Challenge

  1. #31
    Yogi's Avatar Super Undulator
    Join Date
    Feb 2003
    Age
    100
    Posts
    7,711
    Clouds gathering in loungy spheres,
    Everywhere shines the sun, but here 's
    An example of the first three lines,
    i'd rather be in belgium drinking beers,
    and forget my hidden fears,

    and wander off in timeless times
    just the sound of crockets and chimes
    But flying low to pay for my crimes
    on the times i leave behind
    I'm singing timeless rhymes

    All my sins have already been fined
    Still, I find no peace in my soul
    Like rage filled thoughs in a saddend mind
    Still ,no peace, no soul
    And maybe for the better, on the whole

    I'd sell tomorrow, to be with you, just to chase you,
    A tip-toed, lightly footed dandelion thief,
    We would just roll our eyes and think of things to fool them,
    I'm sure we would talk forever.

    Can we stay in this moment forever?
    Is time our enemy once again?
    As love lost long deals so much pain
    Continue...I don't know if it's clever

    It's never to easy for me to find the way that I feel
    I pray to god that you'll say that you'll stay with me
    For something so divine, so natural spinning in this wheel
    If you can say that you love me then tell me, set me free

    Sometimes I see auroras from the corners of my eyes
    it's kinda nice but I think I might be blind.
    That does it, you can't echo that enough
    it falls flat before it's ever heard, expecting way too much.
    I'll just go and hope that everyone is kind...
    and stay inside until the moon begins to rise.

    Take me now, take my hand, take my heart
    Take me to OUR room, to our special place
    You know I'll be there if I can, if we can
    It might not be much, but it's somewhere we can start.


    Huh??

  2. Lounge   -   #32
    JONNO_CELEBS's Avatar Densly Loadan BT Rep: +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Location
    Narfuck
    Age
    46
    Posts
    8,622
    Well My bit was good

    Here's my gcse English Poetry entry which got me a B+

    Somewhere a clock strikes midnight
    And there's a full moon in the sky
    You hear a dog bark in the distance
    You hear someone's baby cry

    A rat runs down the alley
    And a chill runs down your spine
    Someone walks across your grave
    And you wish the sun would shine
    No one's gonna warn you
    And no one's gonna yell 'Attack'
    And you don't feel the steel
    Till it's hanging out your back

    I'm your Night Prowler, asleep in the day
    I'm your Night Prowler, get out of my way
    Look out for the Night Prowler, watch you tonight
    I'm the Night Prowler, when you turn out the light ...

    Too scared to turn your light out
    'Cos there's something on your mind
    Was that a noise outside your window?
    What's that shadow on the blind?
    As you lie there naked
    Like a body in a tomb
    Suspended animation
    As I slip into your room



    I'm your Night Prowler, break down your door
    I'm your Night Prowler, crawling 'cross your floor
    I'm your Night Prowler, make a mess of you, yes I will
    Night Prowler, and I am telling this to you
    There ain't nothing you can do
    (Shazbot... Nanu-Nanu)




    Jonno B)
    Thinking about 1
    My Place & Arcade

  3. Lounge   -   #33
    Yogi's Avatar Super Undulator
    Join Date
    Feb 2003
    Age
    100
    Posts
    7,711
    Jonno.....

    You never cease to amaze me!!!!

    How much beer did you need to write that..........

    Maybe Lamsey can make that into a nice song............



    Yogi

  4. Lounge   -   #34
    JONNO_CELEBS's Avatar Densly Loadan BT Rep: +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Location
    Narfuck
    Age
    46
    Posts
    8,622
    Originally posted by SensualGardening@28 October 2003 - 12:07
    Jonno.....

    You never cease to amaze me!!!!

    How much beer did you need to write that..........

    Maybe Lamsey can make that into a nice song............



    Yogi
    Oh I used to be artistic before I started drinking heavily

    You like it then, took me quite a while to write, but I kinda thought it was spooky

    Jonno B)
    Thinking about 1
    My Place & Arcade

  5. Lounge   -   #35
    Yogi's Avatar Super Undulator
    Join Date
    Feb 2003
    Age
    100
    Posts
    7,711
    Oh I used to be artistic before I started drinking heavily 
    That's funny.
    We mirror.

    I used to drink heavily before i started to get artistic.........

  6. Lounge   -   #36
    JONNO_CELEBS's Avatar Densly Loadan BT Rep: +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Location
    Narfuck
    Age
    46
    Posts
    8,622
    It's weird tho.......I used to be able to paint and dance and sing.............now the only thing I paint is woodwork, the only way I dance is with 2 left feet and singing..............well...........the less said the better

    Jonno B)
    Thinking about 1
    My Place & Arcade

  7. Lounge   -   #37
    Lilmiss's Avatar Poster BT Rep: +4
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Hobbit Shire
    Posts
    10,120
    Originally posted by JONNO_CELEBS@28 October 2003 - 12:10

    You like it then, took me quite a while to write

    hmmmmm.......
    _________________________
    Last edited by Alien5; Today at 12:51

  8. Lounge   -   #38
    I just thought of this poem

    Im reloading my gun
    To start shooting again
    Im going to have some fun
    Because im going to shoot my freind

    He will begg me to stop
    Or he will call a cop

    I will just laugh at his face
    Because im a mental case

    He really pissed me off

    My dear old freind

    He will now get shot

    BANG

    THE END!

  9. Lounge   -   #39
    JONNO_CELEBS's Avatar Densly Loadan BT Rep: +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20BT Rep +20
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Location
    Narfuck
    Age
    46
    Posts
    8,622
    I was gonna post a poem a very special freind wrote for me

    But I can't find it I've lost it, I had a notepad, a pm and a screenshot But it's gone

    Jonno
    Thinking about 1
    My Place & Arcade

  10. Lounge   -   #40
    Lilmiss's Avatar Poster BT Rep: +4
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Hobbit Shire
    Posts
    10,120
    doofus.

    (see ya laters&#33
    _________________________
    Last edited by Alien5; Today at 12:51

Page 4 of 5 FirstFirst 12345 LastLast

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •