Hoi Chebus

Analyse this

Quote:

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Originally Posted by some guy

FST lounge is a place full of fun,
I told you i was black, what a cun,
Some people cant smile. Some people can,
Some are here for gossip, some just for spam.
Like scouring a thesaurus,
I've found the clitoros,
I've made friends, i've made foes,
When will i stop, nobody knows.
Some think i'm an arse, some say i'm gay,
Either way gents, i'm here to stay.

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It's bloody awful.

If it took anything over 20 seconds to write then the "author" should be thoroughly ashamed of themselves.

That's what I thought but I'm not an expert.

I hate people who say they've written a poem, think it's funny, then do a recitation consisting of about 63 associated limericks about funny stuff that happened to victim of said "poem".

Cunts.

everyone's a critic. If any of you knew me, you'd know i write poetry every day. Some people write about their days in diaries, i put it into poems.

Because it took less than 60 secs to write, diesnt mean it's shite.
I am very sharp and think quick. But analyze away, you d....

xx

Your clever use of the aabbccddee was indeed spectacular. As were the rhymes in vernacular.

vernacular is always spectacular.
Thing of me as a word dracular.
FACTULAR!

Your thing is a vampire. :O

That's actually caused by something else mate, it's a burd thing.

what, hitting you repeatedly with a blunt object?

Or a pigeon who nests and feasts amongst cherry orchards?

Your thing is blunt. FFS you really are weird, what with your shiny arse and blunt thing.

i'm my own person, and comfortable with that. I never said i had a waxed arse. I was asking that matthewa person id she does. Cell block H like.