Analyse this
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Analyse this
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Originally Posted by some guy
It's bloody awful.
If it took anything over 20 seconds to write then the "author" should be thoroughly ashamed of themselves.
That's what I thought but I'm not an expert.
I hate people who say they've written a poem, think it's funny, then do a recitation consisting of about 63 associated limericks about funny stuff that happened to victim of said "poem".
Cunts.
everyone's a critic. If any of you knew me, you'd know i write poetry every day. Some people write about their days in diaries, i put it into poems.
Because it took less than 60 secs to write, diesnt mean it's shite.
I am very sharp and think quick. But analyze away, you d....
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Your clever use of the aabbccddee was indeed spectacular. As were the rhymes in vernacular.
vernacular is always spectacular.
Thing of me as a word dracular.
FACTULAR!
Your thing is a vampire. :O
That's actually caused by something else mate, it's a burd thing.
what, hitting you repeatedly with a blunt object?
Or a pigeon who nests and feasts amongst cherry orchards?
Your thing is blunt. FFS you really are weird, what with your shiny arse and blunt thing.
i'm my own person, and comfortable with that. I never said i had a waxed arse. I was asking that matthewa person id she does. Cell block H like.
Yeah, but you do tho' don't you. Even if you didn't say it.
I can tell stuff like that just by speaking to people. You also go to a hairdresser and not a barber. Are comfortable wearing pink and like a nice glass of wine with your meal.
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Originally Posted by jimbo12345
My 'Tirade for manker' took only a few minutes to write, but remains a master piece until this very day :yup:
Poor manker... lost at sheep :cry: