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write some metaphor poems
heres my pick
My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
you try :)
thats good it reminds me of being a kid.
i cant think of any though
My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
My son is a bat.
His eyes blink when darkness comes.
His body stirs with life.
His limbs gorge with blood
as he sets out through the cave of night
his roof the stars
the moon a big white eye watching.
Attracted by the false lights
he mingles with his batty friends
weaving in and out of nightclubs
endless parties
each other’s places
till sensing the sudden ebb
of darkness
he flutters home
a cloaked Dracula
to the hollow of his room
where he will sleep all day.
My mum is a general.
She stalks through the house
telling me what to do.
She then sleeps throughout the night.
But when she wakes up.....
her medals clanking, stars shining
& roars us to attention
she barks orders as she charges
through the house:
" Lisa, do the dishes ! "
" Lisa, clean your room ! "
then crawls back to her bedroom
while we, her dutiful soldiers
carry out her orders.
:o
No TheQuote:
Originally posted by TheDave@4 December 2003 - 01:09
:o
I'm not that quick.
No TheQuote:
Originally posted by J'Pol+4 December 2003 - 00:10--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (J'Pol @ 4 December 2003 - 00:10)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TheDave@4 December 2003 - 01:09
:o
I'm not that quick. [/b][/quote]
i know :o
Do you think Linda does, cos she wrote the extended metaphor poem about My Brother is a Killer Whale.
people who speak in metaphors,
want shot with a baw of their own sh*te
:P
Or Lisa who wrote My Mum
im confused.
who wrote the poem
Ask the person who started the thread, they claim to have written it.Quote:
Originally posted by xbballplaya223x@4 December 2003 - 00:55
write some metaphor poems
heres mine
My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
you try :)
i wrote a poem once and got it in a book. i just remembered
Haha, Jpol knows who wrote it.... You have to be pretty sharp here if you are going to lay claim to other's work! :lol:
Ask the person who started the thread, they claim to have written it. [/b][/quote]Quote:
Originally posted by J'Pol+4 December 2003 - 00:17--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (J'Pol @ 4 December 2003 - 00:17)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-xbballplaya223x@4 December 2003 - 00:55
write some metaphor poems
heres mine
My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
you try :)
i did not claim the write the poem i just picked the best one. The reason because i have to choose a metaphorical poem and make out what it means for a project at schoo. Sorry if you thought i wrote the poem. give me more ideas
if i find mine i'll scan it (its a whole page and im lazy) and i know who wrote it
nigelQuote:
Originally posted by nigel123@4 December 2003 - 01:20
Haha, Jpol knows who wrote it.... You have to be pretty sharp here if you are going to lay claim to other's work! :lol:
You imply plagiarism, I am quite frankly shocked. How could you say such a thing.
nigelQuote:
Originally posted by J'Pol+4 December 2003 - 00:24--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (J'Pol @ 4 December 2003 - 00:24)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nigel123@4 December 2003 - 01:20
Haha, Jpol knows who wrote it.... You have to be pretty sharp here if you are going to lay claim to other's work! :lol:
You imply plagiarism, I am quite frankly shocked. How could you say such a thing. [/b][/quote]
Sorry, I did not mean to imply plagiarism, I could not remember that word! I meant plagiarism!
to be frank, I'd have to change my name ;)
That's true :lol:Quote:
Originally posted by Proper Bo, I tell thee@4 December 2003 - 00:26
to be frank, I'd have to change my name ;)
You have changed your opening post to "here's my pick", rather then "here's mine".Quote:
Originally posted by xbballplaya223x@4 December 2003 - 00:55
write some metaphor poems
heres my pick
My brother is a killer whale.
He is huge and scary
with tatts, long hair & beard.
But underneath he is meek
spending time in the garden
and around the house
socialising with the ones
he loves
giving my cousins rides
upon his back.
Truly he is more dolphin than killerwhale.
you try :)
FFS not only are you a plagiarist but you are also a lying bag of shite.
Have you no self respect. Why do you think I quoted you in the first place. Admit you stole someone else's work and claimed it for yourself.